Sincere- Never Saw Me Again (produced by Life n Death)

[Vettori]

Check out a Song by my friend Sincere, he recorded this at my house

Produced by Life n Death

http://hulkshare.com/x8x6i520ul5d

And for all his other Songs check out

http://hulkshare.com/sincere

Link of feed

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=109697&p=1548770#p1548770

[Block]

This is pretty dope, bro. I only have a a few things to critique.. Before that, his voice is pretty dope. It's smooth with nice emotion.

Okay, my criticism.. The hook. It needs more layers. It seems really bland and it drags the entire song down with it. It seems like he's also attempting to sing on the hook but isn't committing to it. Like a half chant, half sing, half "i dont know what the fuck I'm doing" lol. My advice there would be to just commit to it.

Your dude is talented, no doubt. I like the content and subject matter. His rhymes aren't overly complex but not overly basic, either. He's got a nice middle ground in there.

That being said, my second critique would be his flow. I mean, he flows alot better than most people I've heard, but it's still pretty choppy in some points. There's a few nice points where it's smooth as hell and he transitions nicely. Then there's points where he could have used an extra syllable or two so he wouldn't have to exaggerate a word to hit the snare. Know what I mean? If his flow was tidied up a little and he committed to the hook, this song would be dope as shit.

As it is, I'd give it a 7.5/10.

[Steve Spag]

I don't usually comment on other people's work if someone else is promoting for them 'cause it tells me that they don't care enough to do it themselves....but I'll make an exception this one time for you Vet. Pretty good track though, dude's got a nice relaxed flow and glides on this beautiful beat. I felt that the hook was kind of lacking but the verses were good. Is that you on the hook? If not, he sounds IDENTICAL to you, lol.

[Vettori]

Thank you guys i'll send this Feedback to him, so he can Understand what he needs work on.

Thanks for going out of your way, He will soon be a member, but at this moment he's going through some fucked up shit.Once it passes. He'll be more active


and yeaa i said two words on the hook in the backround

[SINCERE-MUSIC]

yeah, Thanks for the feed, And ill definitely work on all that, I feel because of certain situations in my life i haven't been putting the energy needed into my music, I feel i have whats needed to make good music every one can relate to, I just don't put as much effort in as i should, i have a lot of interferences in the way emotionally, You'd think i could use that even more to my advantage but when your in that positions things change, Thanks for the feed and support guy's now that I've made an account you should be hearing more of me thanks

[Nefarious]

Lol i just wanna bump this cuz this song is REALLY worth hearing, sincere's a beast lol good track my friend, as always.

[Vettori]

i thought this was very personal.

[preest]

this kept my interest the whole way through, I love tracks with this kind of feel! I think the vocals could maybe have been a little bit lower and blended and little more into the beat but it didnt really matter, the track came out dope!!! I wasnt feeling the hook at first but by the end of the track I was enjoying it, it could have been a little more layered to add more depth but all in all, the tracks dope. 7/10 nice job