Explicit - Im Not Normal (ft. WesT) [Prod. M15HKA]

[Tranquil]

A new track featuring WesT. Im on some horrorcore type shit at the moment. The track is produced by M15HKA, a really dope producer And yeah, thats really i have to say about the track. Oh and i kinda sing on the hook, its eirther a love or hate thing. All i know is to me personally its better than Auto-Tune and all that shit. So check it out, and ill appreciate any feed

Link Of Feedback:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=108617

Lyrics:
Verse 1: (Me)
Scary... images in my mind/
Cutting hedges in the shape i designed/
With miscarriages combined/
No escapes no changes everything on time/
From midges to judges, aint not time for me to unwind/
Prime time, season of the killings/
No reason, for the thrill blood drippings/
Chasing victims uphill, grass clippings/
Corpses hanging from their earlobes/
Causes loud banging, flashing lights like strobes, oh/
The body swings, the aurora stinging the nostrils/
Fare from Pandora, the only details lots of fossils/
Ill cut myself rite after ill cut you/
Shut up you mutt, this is something you cant wont do/

Hook:
Im not normal, and im far away from it/
Its paranormal, it takes awhile to commit/
Just look into my eyes/
And then you'll realize/
Im not normal, no, im not normal/

Verse 2: (WesT)
What you gonna' do when I slit you fast and I hit your back with my fist closed, jack/
Never gonna' stop for shit, don't quit until they're dead and they're wrists get slashed/
It's time to unleash the beast beneath and eat the piece of their flesh with ease/
Feast on their meat, oh it tastes so sweet, time to snuggle with the corpse layin' next to me/
I'm where the darkness is, I'm makin' out with dead carcasses/
I come off as normal but ooo boy, I'm way too far from it/
I cut my wrist and stitch it up just so I can rip them out/
Put on a dress and some make-up and then I hit myself/
And when you're dead, I, color you up with red eyes/
Strip you naked and myself and then it's off for bedtime/
Never piss me off, I'll slit you, dawg, trust me, I don't wanna lose it/
I may be friendly and kind but think twice 'cause the truth is/

Hook:

Download/Stream (New Link):
http://limelinx.com/files/4f15bac43872d ... 391815793f

[Jay Tunes]

it says this file is not a format that can be previewed?

[WesTMusiK]

Dope shit, man! You definitely killed it!

[M15HKA]

Fucken awesome Always was a fan of Explicit but never listened to WesT, dude is dope. Both of you did a great job.

Oh and to solve the preview option just hit the download button. It's only 2.5mb or something.

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@Jay Tunes I upped a new link so you can stream it now

[Jay Tunes]

thanks bro sorry man its just a limited amount of tracks make my itunes haha


Explicit:
Flow - nice...
Lyrics - good wordplay, nice verse overall.. nothing too crazy.
Hook - pretty decent, you're not normal
other - voice sounds a lil too robotic(some mics make it sound like that), try addin some bass, or EQs

West:
Flow - damnnnnnnnnn killa. u went HAM, dope!
Lyrics - were just as good as the flow.
Other - with that flow, if your voice was a tiny bit thicker would be awesomeeeeeeeeness

[Tranquil]

thanks bro sorry man its just a limited amount of tracks make my itunes haha


Explicit:
Flow - nice...
Lyrics - good wordplay, nice verse overall.. nothing too crazy.
Hook - pretty decent, you're not normal
other - voice sounds a lil too robotic(some mics make it sound like that), try addin some bass, or EQs

West:
Flow - damnnnnnnnnn killa. u went HAM, dope!
Lyrics - were just as good as the flow.
Other - with that flow, if your voice was a tiny bit thicker would be awesomeeeeeeeeness

Thanks for feeding man, and yeah i think it was the way i done my ad-libs for the verse, i don't know Thanks for dropping feed tho man

[_Ironic_]

peepin


damn you! stop getting better hahahaha.

flow is flawless, the slow part coulda been done a lil better.. and u shouldn't have ended with it...but the beginning was really dope bro, keep rockin.


west:
flow was fast, but pretty dope. you sound exactly like this white boy I used to record with. his name was tristan...i dunno, just alike though.


overall 7.5 only cuz it was short.



return the feed if u get a chance, tracks called 'cougar'

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peepin


damn you! stop getting better hahahaha.

flow is flawless, the slow part coulda been done a lil better.. and u shouldn't have ended with it...but the beginning was really dope bro, keep rockin.


west:
flow was fast, but pretty dope. you sound exactly like this white boy I used to record with. his name was tristan...i dunno, just alike though.


overall 7.5 only cuz it was short.



return the feed if u get a chance, tracks called 'cougar'

Yooooo, havnt heard from you in awhile. Thanks for peepin' the track and feeding it And for sure man, im checkin' it now

[Block]

It sounds like whoever mixed this made the highs way too high when they eq'd. Either that, or they took out too much bass.

fix up the eq and add some layers on the hook. and a little more emotion inthe chanting of it, and this would be golden.

Overall you guys fit together pretty good. Nice shit here.

[Tranquil]

It sounds like whoever mixed this made the highs way too high when they eq'd. Either that, or they took out too much bass.

fix up the eq and add some layers on the hook. and a little more emotion inthe chanting of it, and this would be golden.

Overall you guys fit together pretty good. Nice shit here.

Well i mixed all of my vocals, WesT mixed his. So its my bad, i cant mix for shit All i know is that my vocals sound better than what they do Raw, so im happy with that

Thanks for taking the time and listening bro

[Scrubz]

Good shit boys. Explict you killed it kid, prefected that flow man. Lyrics and delivery were sick!
West you steped your game up! fast flow was sick, really liked the multies!
For me you both had great chemistry with each other, wish the track was longer!

[Tranquil]

Good shit boys. Explict you killed it kid, prefected that flow man. Lyrics and delivery were sick!
West you steped your game up! fast flow was sick, really liked the multies!
For me you both had great chemistry with each other, wish the track was longer!

Appreciate the feed brah, glad that you liked it

[B.A.D.]

First off the beat is hot, I like the melody, the only thing its that is missing composition man, its too plain, seems like nothing goes on except the piano and when it does its not noticeable. You need to get more stuff going and blend it in a perfect way to not make it sound overcrowded, like for instance, the hook could use some trumpets that go along with explicit's hook, specially to compliement his terrible singing (no offense). and maybe some high full strings for the outro u know?.. make love to the beat haha.

Explicit - your rhyme scheme and the way you flowed your verse was unique and demonstrated an elevation and improvement you should be proud off. Really the only thing you need to do is perfect your mixing and have consistency, if you keep on practicing you will be able to do amazing things. now that you can nail the mutlis and create an original flow it only a matter of time before you step a level enough to be considered "one of the dopest" you know? lmao.... (and change your rap name)

WesT - very different of what I've heard from you before. There's just 2 things I didn't like, 1- your voice, its not very ear-friendly, and kinda lacks emotion. 2 - your style, I dont think I am the only one thinking this but that is 100% Eminem man, and these days you are going to get a lot of shit for that. Now on the good note, your breath control and syllabic writing is top notch, you now perfectly the amount of words you can rhyme without fucking up the structure, plus you display great technique in rapping. You need to expand the vocab a bit, for this type of songs you need to show as much complexity as possible, beacuse thats one of the distinguishable aspects of Horror-core tracks.

excelent performance.

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First off the beat is hot, I like the melody, the only thing its that is missing composition man, its too plain, seems like nothing goes on except the piano and when it does its not noticeable. You need to get more stuff going and blend it in a perfect way to not make it sound overcrowded, like for instance, the hook could use some trumpets that go along with explicit's hook, specially to compliement his terrible singing (no offense). and maybe some high full strings for the outro u know?.. make love to the beat haha.

Explicit - your rhyme scheme and the way you flowed your verse was unique and demonstrated an elevation and improvement you should be proud off. Really the only thing you need to do is perfect your mixing and have consistency, if you keep on practicing you will be able to do amazing things. now that you can nail the mutlis and create an original flow it only a matter of time before you step a level enough to be considered "one of the dopest" you know? lmao.... (and change your rap name)

WesT - very different of what I've heard from you before. There's just 2 things I didn't like, 1- your voice, its not very ear-friendly, and kinda lacks emotion. 2 - your style, I dont think I am the only one thinking this but that is 100% Eminem man, and these days you are going to get a lot of shit for that. Now on the good note, your breath control and syllabic writing is top notch, you now perfectly the amount of words you can rhyme without fucking up the structure, plus you display great technique in rapping. You need to expand the vocab a bit, for this type of songs you need to show as much complexity as possible, beacuse thats one of the distinguishable aspects of Horror-core tracks.

excelent performance.

Woah! Thanks alot for the feed man. I know im terrible at singing, but imo it was better than resorting to Auto-Tune I really appreciate everything that you said man. After the little break that im going to take ill come back with a great mic, and a new rap name (im gonna take time and think of a unique one) and shit like that, and when i come back.... imma fuck shit up

I appreciate you taking the time to give a detailed feed