COUGARRRRRRRR - GT

[_Ironic_]

COUGAR:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/87800097e6e36ac2/
http://limelinx.com/files/9d8b3ad9fbdb2 ... 2f0933294d


Suburban hero.


feedback:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=109819&p=1551905#p1551905
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=108543&p=1551901#p1551901

[Tranquil]

The beat isnt really my cup of tea but you saved the song

The vocals seemed a little to loud over the beat. The second verse was a little better in volume. I liked what you did here though, kinda whispering, and your flow was really smooth and nice, you made it really enjoyable to listen

I liked the hook, "Im looking for cougar, 34, 45, 46" you got that stuck in my head now, hahaha

I liked the lyrics, stayed on topic throughout the song

4.5/5 Man, cant wait for the mixtape

[M15HKA]

You have a fucken cool voice. Deliver it in a cool way too Overall the track sounds pretty cool would be even better if you spazzed out at some stage.

[B.A.D.]

Dude, you need a better beat for this man... the beat is trash, but like Explicit said, you made it better. great great great song, kind the shit thats on the radio, but good.

its funny, catchy, flows good, lyrics cool for this type. The hook is cool.

nothing much i can tell you but, Get a better beat... Important. (send me your pella and If you want I'll hook you up with something better).
second, get this shit mastered cuz there's a couple of errors quality wise. your vocals are perfectly mixed but the track needs that 100% studio work.
third, get this bitch on the radio.

and thats that man. good job, You lifted my hopes for First single type music.

peep this song of mine if u get the time bro
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=109697

[Tash8]

cougars yummm...

concept is funny, good shit..overall good song

[Emadyville]

First off, I will say this isnt my type of song, but I'm gunna feed ya straight

I saw others didnt like the beat, and maybe just having it I wouldn't like it either, but I thought it sounded good with your voice, how you attacked it, and made it more "catchy", or added to what you did that was catchy I should say, so yeah beat I liked for this

Vocals did seem slightly loud, Im listenin on my laptop though so I can never really tell if its my laptop or not, but one thing I def think was too loud were the, I guess whispers/whispering things you did. They at first almost seemed like they were a distraction, but as the song progressed they added in a positive way...but some parts seemed too loud, to where it was hard to understand exactly what you were saying (not sure if it matters for this type of song tho tbh ).

Hook was catchy, and like I said, the beat made it even better

This is def a radio type track, again, not my taste, but you did very well and def made a solid track, good work

Edit: forget to mention, the way you delivered this was cool cause you didnt sound like yourself at all from the other songs I've fed by you, which obviously is a plus.

[Jay Tunes]

I liked the beat
Flow - fuckin chill and dope. Delivery was excellent
Lyrics - nice, your linked every bar so nice.
Mastering/Quality - A bit loud, but it's just fine i guess bc it doesn't sound distorted
Hook - Had me bobbin my head

you're pretty good dude, and ur voice is nice. #keepitup


ps. check me out viewtopic.php?f=38&t=109699

[Tornado]

Everyone's said it but the beat sounds weak. I know i hate these kinds of beats but this is especially weak, it feels like it wouldn't bang in the club. I'd like to hear you on a more "full" bea, maybe somethng a biit more melodic and different drums cos every song i hear from you has a similar beat.

[Scrubz]

Pretty good stuff, not my style at all but the quality was good. Think you go a lil o.d on the backing and ad libs but its dosnt really bring the quality down. Your delivery and lyrics were a bit boring imo. Flow was on point tho, great stuff. Like i said its not my type of song but its a good song on the technical side. I didnt like how the second verse turned into you naming girls, didnt think it was creative. really liked the hook, very catchy.

So to sum it up your flow was great, delivery and lyrics a little boring.(imo) Production and mixing were top notch, and thought the beat was ok. Not bad by any means, just not my cup of tea.

Check out my new track call talk is cheap, id like for you to see my progression and get some of your opinons/tips.

[_Ironic_]

^^ drop a link bro and I'll check it out for you


everybody else, thank you for the feedback. I really appreciate the listens and comments, good or bad.

[Scrubz]

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=110115

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

i actually think the beat is bangin....hi hats and bass...simple but effective
flow is flawless....quality u know whats up!....tho the singin part (bridge) was not really up to par of the whole song...

[_Ironic_]

thanks c-riz, appreciate the honesty.


where the fuck u been at? hahaha

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

different places seen different faces haha..
nah i actually did a studio EP....went local with it...im not the superstar now but got some new listeneres now so yeah...im on my way...lol..its on my youtube channel btw
got like 10tracks on hold..learnin to become a producer...try somethin video-youtube hype thing...

anyway...not the thread to discuss
when does suburban hero drop?

[_Ironic_]

bump!!~~!!