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[B.A.D.]

I'm gonna fix this song before posting again.

[B.A.D.]

and the feed
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[Scrubz]

Damn I wish you could sing lol. Beat was pretty dope, both verses were great and the hook nd the bridge....well yeah not so good. Good concept but it didn't work out the way it should have. Flow was impeccable, lyrics were top notch. The only other thing I can complain about is that some time I felt like you over did it with the delivery and tone of ur voice. Some parts are forced.

This all being said the hook didn't ruin the song, it just kept it from being great. 7.5/10. Good shit as always brother.

[gutawafang]

I think it's pretty good man. Lyrics and rhyme structure is awesome. As in, the rhyme scheme.The chours is catchy as usual but there were notes that were out of tune man. Work on the singing. But overall, it was a nice listen.

[Block]

I loved the beat. shit, bro. Dope. The only thing wrong with it, imo, was that the horns were too loud.

The verses were nice. I like your presence. My only criticism here is that your flow seems a little rushed in a few spots. Other than that, nice.

The hook would have sounded better with your vocals as the background, imo. A little quieter and they would have sounded dope.

Overall, love the feel of the track and the beat. I'm going to be in contact with you for instrumentals for my project, bro.

[Xray]

Damn that was pretty tight. The beat is nice, mixing is getting much better. Your lyrics are stepping up too, props for that. You've always flowed on beats but it's always been a messy flow. I've never heard you once have a polished up flow, that just runs smooth, with every line being perfectly edited to match the beat in the best possible way. You always have extra syllables. Your beats are light years beyond your old ones. Keep it elevating homie.

You need to polish up your flow so it's easier to understand you without having to read your lyrics. Cause it's honestly very messy. You are breathing all over the place, you need to have a stable balance. Not saying your flow is bad, it's definitely not bad, it's dope, just needs some extra touches and it will be perfect. Nice track bro, minus the singing, I fast forwarded the singing, cause I hate your singing voice, real talk. Keep working for that perfection mayne, it's only a matter of time.

[B.A.D.]

greatness greatness, It has been a long time since I actually got helpfull feedback

wasnut- thanks a lot man, I did forced the delivery on purpose, all this tracks I've been doing are experimental so I need to try out different things to see whats up

guta - thanks homie, I appreciate that, and yup, I'm not sticking to this singing way.

k block - thanks a lot brother, I'll take in account the volume of the horns for next timeI use them. I did rushed the flow a bit, but I didnt noticed it until I uploaded it, I was actually in a rush to record this so, that might be why, like I said, I'm experimenting with stuff to see what goes and what not.

Sajjad - I really appreciate your feedback, the mixing keeps getting better but like I always said, doesnt matter what you do its never gonna be as good as studio, so might as well keep it listenable right? haha. I agree that when I do this kind of tracks the flow is not what I take most into account, but In my album tho', if you listened to it you can see how I really flow if I set my mind to it. I will work on the syllables thing and the pronunciation that keeps fucking with me.
and yeah, the singing on this sucks. I'm gonna drop it for good

thanks again to everyone that listened, even the "silent listeners" lmao
thanks fam.

[Tornado]

Beat was alright apart from the Horns on the Bridge as they overpowered everything else. Listening to the verses, felt like some lines were swamped with too many syllables on some lines which makes it harder to understand your lyrics on those lines. Also feel your emotion in your voice jumps around too much, it'd be cooler if you had a constant more laid back delievery.

Was gonna say i hated the singing, but you already acknowledge that so no point

[B.A.D.]

Beat was alright apart from the Horns on the Bridge as they overpowered everything else. Listening to the verses, felt like some lines were swamped with too many syllables on some lines which makes it harder to understand your lyrics on those lines. Also feel your emotion in your voice jumps around too much, it'd be cooler if you had a constant more laid back delievery.

Was gonna say i hated the singing, but you already acknowledge that so no point

thanks for the listening man, I will take your advice.
its pretti much what everyone has said, so I will def take it in account for my continuos work.

thanks again for commenting

[Xray]

Sajjad - I really appreciate your feedback, the mixing keeps getting better but like I always said, doesnt matter what you do its never gonna be as good as studio, so might as well keep it listenable right? haha. I agree that when I do this kind of tracks the flow is not what I take most into account, but In my album tho', if you listened to it you can see how I really flow if I set my mind to it. I will work on the syllables thing and the pronunciation that keeps fucking with me.
and yeah, the singing on this sucks. I'm gonna drop it for good

Man...if you drop the whole singing thing, you will become twice as dope. It's actually very rare to hear you rapping in your hooks, it's always something different and sometimes that takes away from the feel of the track. Cause as a listener, you feel something, you want it to stay that way, because you feel that emotion, but when something too noticeable pops up, it takes away from it's emotion and it's replay value. Mad respect for that man, I been waiting for you to drop the whole singing thing for AGES now. Wise decision man, your natural style is aggressive, even though you make a lot of radio type songs, and shit like that, you sound best when you are spitting aggressive shit. Can't wait for new shit.

[B.A.D.]

lol, I'm not gonna drop the whole hook singing thing, just this type of high pitched out of tune singing, I will still do the one that I know I can do. And many other people do seem to like my non-exaggerated singing hooks lol, as well as I do enjoy them, so I'm not giving up on that aspect. just this kind.

[Xray]

Lmao. It's still progress none the less.

Less singing for me =

[B.A.D.]

Lmao. It's still progress none the less.

Less singing for me =

not really tho', I guess it depends.
I wanna try to do kind of what LowKey did on Terrorist. thats my next goal, and that I guarantee is enjoyable for at least 99% of world's population. lol

but yeah, I will also be doing more rapping hooks on my following experimental tracks

[_Steven_]

Please release this instro without your singing on the hook. TR contest or some shit. Your production is dope as shit.

[Tranquil]

The singing sounded pre good for me, i mean it wasn't the best but it was pretty decent

Your flow on this song was insane! You were on point all the way through, i loved it, and for the lyrics..........

"Followed... by this thunder lighting sculpture crawling.... to this fallen fighting soldier"
Fucking loved that line, that made my eyes open wider when i heard that

Your delivery was pretty good aswell (as always) i dont think ive ever heard a track from you were your delivery isnt on point

Overall: 5/5 defiantly going on my iPod

Keep 'em coming man