Tornado: Just Bounce

[Tornado]

Damm bit to big..anywayz

Just Bounce
Produced by: Anno Domini
Recorded by: Bankz
Mixed by: Tornado

A Club Song but not your typical radio shit....

(1st Verse)
Early Friday night so what are my plans?
at my bredda's koching, just rocking to jams
with a little bit of liquor and a sack of crow
you'd be surprised how quick the jack daniels go
pass that shit around and take that hit down
and a little bit later we gon hit the town
looking for gal dem whose look is intruiging
you can't explain it but the sex is appealing
i'm feeling, quite in a rocking mood
so there's only 1 thing which i got to do
all the mans set off from the ends we travel
not even sure how the night will unravel
but fuck it, we buzzing, going out to rave
no promises now if we misbehave
so a little bit of queuing, then we flew in
now do your thing blud, start skanking and moving

(Hook*2)
Just Bounce
When we come up in the house
Just Bounce
Cos you know what we're about
Just Bounce
Let's get fucked up, no doubt
Just Bounce
We consuming large amounts

(2nd Verse)
Step in the rave, looking hoodlum-esque
i don't dress up blud, i'm good, i'm bless
hoodies and trainers, that's what i'm rocking
hopefully bouncers won't try and stop him
so we in as a group, start moving to tunes
eventually i find myself, choosing to move
straight to the bar now, J.D. my bredda
downing it raw, now can things get better
come back to the group, now me and my dude
done seen 2 gal them that make us go "oooo"
so we dancing with them, whilst we conversating
i ain't hearing too much, except for the bass-in
this bitch, so fuck it, no time for talking
when certain tunes are on, you gotta stop gawking
and move with the chick, spit no game
show the gal now how you go and do your thang blud
(Chorus)

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[Xray]

Damn man this is fucking dope. This is how a real motherfucker makes a club track. Your clarity is becoming much better man, I don't even need the lyrics anymore, I can understand you fully. Flow was Tornado trademark, delivery sounded perfect, lyrics were straight. I love that beat, dope ass beat. Mixing sounds real fucking good, except when you say "just bounce" I would of lowered that by -2db's. Otherwise this is flawless. Hit me up with that tape when you done fam, I always liked your shit. Gotta peep volume 1 for now though. That was straight.

[Scrubz]

Not bad man, I can understand you alot more now! I think the flow and delivery was kinda forced and there were parts were you added extra syllables and it messed up the flow. Good rhymes and really loved the lyrics. The chorus was good but needed a little more in my opinion, a lil empty.

Beat was hella good and the mixing was clean, nothing to complain about in that department.

Overall it was good, il give it a 7/10.

Now not to sound like a dick but i feed you when you put shit on but you never give me feed back, id appreciate it if you did . Check out my new shit; Scrubz - talk is cheap thanks man.

[Tash8]

ok man, well first verse was choppy overall, a lot of lines were stretched out and some were rushed, however, your second verse was real smooth. I like the hook, though i wish you had a lil more bounce when u said Just bounce haha, u know a lil more thump in it rather than just the low deep voice.

Overall I like this, very catchy tune, the beat doesn't seem like a club track though you make it fit, props on that. Good work man.

would appreciate your feedback on this or This, please n thanks.

[B.A.D.]

do you have a streaming link??

I want to listen to it before downloading if thats ok with you, I need to watch out for computer space n shit so.

[Tornado]

Cheers everyone for the feed, i've fed your recent tracks back and Ax, new Youtube link is at the top

[Jay Tunes]

flow - was smooth. better on the second verse tho
lyrics - good, enjoyed reading them while listening
hook - pretty nice. more energy in the words between "just bounce!"
other - pretty good quality

on another note,
your accent doesnt allow me to like this song though... sorry bro, but keep doing your thing

[Tornado]

Cheers FD & Jay for checking, although i don't see why an accent shouldn't allow you to enjoy a track, it's whatever man.

[B.A.D.]

oh, forgot about this lol

what part of England r u from?? you have a very very heavy accent. I like the beat a lot, reading the lyrics I thought it was gonna be a club banguer, this was a surprise, it was a good one. I have a recomendation for the hook. its a good idea for Just Bounce beain the heavy hitter on it, but use 4 different ones. one like the first you did, then Just Bounce, but melodical, with the beat, I pictured that in my head and souns amazing... I dont know how to explain it.
like
-Just Bounce F note
-Just Bounce E note
-Just Bounce D note
-Just Bounce E note

believe me, it will sound great.

the lyrics are good on the first verse, second verse are wonderfull...
yeah man, pretti good song, but like the other guy said, accent makes it hard for people like us that we're not really used to it.

also the mixing is excelent

[Tornado]

Thanks for the feed Ax, i'm London born and bred, but my accent is just my voice, no one sounds like me lol. As for the chorus, i know what you're saying but for this track, it wouldn't suit my voice singing, if i had your range, i might have tried it lol.

[Jay Tunes]

bc its too strong for my taste too really enjoy it, but dont get me wrong tho i respect your hustle bro