Well, this is kind of me just fooling around and experimenting. I got the idea yesterday and wrote the lyrics in an hour or so, then I recorded it in a few tries this morning. I know the quality sucks, I just can't do anything about it at the moment

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LYRICS:
(Verse 1)
There's a beast in me, consuming me
It's dooming me, to act foolishly
Cruelty, it's ruling me
It's chewing me up, I can't make it stop
I just take my head, shake it and nod
Yeah, I have to fake it, god it's odd
Now I must not, just bust out
Even tho I want to, I let my lust rot
I cuss it out, shush it, shout!
It ain't even nothing to discuss about
No descussion, just concussions
My brain is crushing, my vein's flushing
Over, with monster blood
No fuckin way, this can't be good!
I'm getting bigger, I keep on morphing
But inside my head I just keep on dwarfing
(Hook)
So what if you can see the darkest side of me
No one will ever change this animal I have become
Help me believe it's not the real me
Somebody help me tame this animal
This animal, this animal
(Verse 2)
Pain can be heavy, when you're the carrier
It just ain't always the more the merrier
It's a fucking slaughter burried here
That's why I never worry, no fear
I never feel sorry, I never feel scared
But I'm scarred, oh so hard
You should make a note of it tard
From now on, I'll never open my guard
But all this shit, I hope to discard
If I just woke up with new cards
A new fresh start, I'd use it smart
I'd use it to amuse my heart
But all this pain's got a use in art
This way I might end up on the music charts
(Hook)
So what if you can see the darkest side of me
No one will ever change this animal I have become
Help me believe it's not the real me
Somebody help me tame this animal I have become
Help me believe it's not the real me
Somebody help me tame this animal
(Verse 3)
Somebody help me through this nightmare
I can't control myself
Somebody wake me from this nightmare
I can't escape this hell
This animal (x7)
(Bridge)
Now there's still one more finale in me
I might get out of this alley and flee
Then the monster can rally with me
I know one thing tho, verbally I'm free!
(B/W Bridge)
So what if you can see the darkest side of me
No one will ever change this animal I have become
Help me believe it's not the real me
Somebody help me tame this animal I have become
(Hook)
Help me believe it's not the real me
Somebody help me tame this animal I have become
Help me believe it's not the real me
Somebody help me tame this animal
This animal I have become