The Cannibal & Incredible (dupstep rap)

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Okey, you guys are probably sick of me posting here all the time, I would be too. But I feel like I'm getting alot better now, and thanks to your feedback my quality is better than when I started, still not very good, but better!

So these are two songs I made today, and I'm pretty satisfied with both of them. "The Cannibal" is a fun song about the current state of hip hop, with a beat that's a mix of new and old-skool. The second one is a darker one, the content is pretty much the same, but more about Norway in a way. And the second one is a dupstep beat. (I didn't make either of the beats)

Please check them out and tell me what you think! And they're completley different songs, so if you don't like one of them, give the other one a chance! Thanks in advance! Any feedback is highly appriciated as always!

The Cannibal - The Cannibal:
http://hulkshare.com/1zhmocm7omvh

The Cannibal - Incredible
http://hulkshare.com/rc470mulkq6o

(Beats: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R-CMuGVg8uc & http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oib0JvkDzYk)

And if you're interested in following me further on, please subscribe to my YouTube channel (http://www.YouTube.com/TheCannibal95) What's on there currently ain't as good as these two songs, but they'll be uploaded eventually, and more will come! I'm trying to upload one each weak.

LYRICS:

The Cannibal

The Cannibal, the C-C-Cannibal (x4)

They've torn down our fucking dynasty shield
Let's build it again - with a mine filled field
Let's fill the gap - a renevation of rap
Cause we're the next generation, and we're brining it back

The Cannibal, the C-C-Cannibal (x2)

Now I wonder why the media is sacrafacing G.O.A.T's
When they could rather kill of that fat araising Ross
And proceed to grow some balls - like Johnny fuckin' Noxville
And not like Justin Beebs, who thinks having cocks kill (baby, baby)
Now I'm just gonna keep, cummin' in my fucking socks till
I finish my leap, and get to Paradox'ville

The Cannibal, the C-C-Cannibal (x4)

People spill what's ill, though real skill will remain
It all got killed, when Soulja stepped into this game (crank that whoo)
Nowdays it fuckin feels like fame is just a shame
It's all whack today, but back in the day
I could be rappin to insane, amounts of fans
But nowdays some R'nB shit's all that counts to man

The Cannibal, the C-C-Cannibal (x4)

Take a look at your balls, yeah this pube is new
And I'm solve this shit, call me Scooby fuckin Doo (woff)
Cause I'ma evolve 'till I'm more than a noob to you
I will persue it to, the day the zoo is filled
With kill'd Lil Anus'es and Nicki Minajes (haha)
Cause I can't be the only who's sick of this grabage

The Cannibal, the C-C-Cannibal (x2)

And we can't help but gettin it forced down our throaths
And Nicki, you would tap that whore without clothes
But that's as far as it goes, cause her rapping sucks
Yet's she's crapping bucks, like she's Scrooge McDuck
And Rick Ross, who could like this huge fat fuck? (hustelin)
It's time I came around to boost this up (wroom)
Talent doesn't sucks, in mainstream it's a minority
Yeah, now aren't we? Fuck Pop and fuck R'nB!

The Cannibal, the C-C-Cannibal (x4)

I'm living like a fuckin recluse in this apartment
Tryina somwhow, cruise into the department
Of Norwegian hip hop, it's all just a big flop
So I'ma dig some shit up to save real hip hop

Incredible:

I'm far down underground, you can call me Super Mario
But I'm way smarter though, could go as far as martyrs go
I know I'm just a starter now, but because this art is all
I've got, I'm going for the top slot spot
Tho I'm just another rapper, one more fish in the sea
One more wishin to be, seen, wishin to recognized
I still won't record lies, I will simply wreck and frie
Every-fucking-single-thing, every single second I
Am - on this microphone, everytime Michael's home
Yeah, like it or not, but what I'm writing is hot
Like fucking Katy Perry! I'm excalating steady
I'm nothing less than great and I feel like I'm ready
To be another Freddy, a nightmare in Norway
I'll iginte the fear of glory and I'll fight the boring
State of the music, what if I ate two pricks?
Just hand me toothpick and I'll mute it

I look at you as eatable, and we haven't met at all
But I've still said it all, that's cause I'm incredible
Better be ready ya'll! I should be a federal case
I'm on shredder craze, I'll get them to erease
What they've said in the race, like "Erik & Kriss"
You should fear a diss, I don't know where I could miss
You suck in every aspect, your lyrics are shit
I don't know why you're famous, it's clear that it is!

[BILI]

Honestly man...there were few decent lines...you need better quality(even tho its ok,there are people with worse) and your mixing is so-so.That c-c-cannibal hook is the worst part of both joints,its annoying imo.1st song is not that good.While the 2nd one is nice...its much better then the 1st one and I enjoyed it more,but beat needs to be louder.Mix it better.

[B.A.D.]

The Cannibal

I like the turntable effect, how you did that?
I love the flow and the whole idea of the song haha, its nice, you gotta work on that flow man, its good by itself but doesnt go smooth with the beat. and has to do a lot with your mixing aswell. your vocals are to high on the beat.

I loved the song tho', very enjoyable

Incredible

not my thing this one, haha, its actually interesting and creative but lol... yeah, same thing man, the beat is too low and your vocal too high, I like the lyrics tho'. but the beat... eww.. not me lol

keep at it bro

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Honestly man...there were few decent lines...you need better quality(even tho its ok,there are people with worse) and your mixing is so-so.That c-c-cannibal hook is the worst part of both joints,its annoying imo.1st song is not that good.While the 2nd one is nice...its much better then the 1st one and I enjoyed it more,but beat needs to be louder.Mix it better.

Yeah, the lyrics for the first song was written 3 months ago or so, and the other one in half an our just recently. The c-c-cannibal hook was supposed to sound a little different, but I couldn't get the right effect, so I settled for that. But thanks alot for the feed! I'll make the beat louder next time!

The Cannibal

I like the turntable effect, how you did that?
I love the flow and the whole idea of the song haha, its nice, you gotta work on that flow man, its good by itself but doesnt go smooth with the beat. and has to do a lot with your mixing aswell. your vocals are to high on the beat.

I loved the song tho', very enjoyable

The turntable effect was made in Cubase AI 5, I was basically just messing around with the effects. I was going to have more of a scratching sound, but I couldn't get it right >.< But I'm glad you liked it!
And yeah, I'll work more on my flow and make the beat louder next time! And thanks alot!

Incredible

not my thing this one, haha, its actually interesting and creative but lol... yeah, same thing man, the beat is too low and your vocal too high, I like the lyrics tho'. but the beat... eww.. not me lol

keep at it bro

Haha yeah, I was kind of experimenting. I was very happy with it at first, then I listened to it a bit, and thought it wasn't that good, but then I suddenly liked it again So I'm not sure what to think of it myself. Yeah, I'll fix the vocals from now on! Thanks alot!