Big Ax-D - I'm Better Than You

[B.A.D.]

feedback link: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=110687


produced by me

like I said, I'm tryng out diferent styles, I wanted now to test a darker vibe on a battle type track.
see how it went. I think I might have fucked up a bit on the mixing, but Im not really sure... any ideas??

http://hulkshare.com/0ght1x0ax6kp

lyrics:

(Verse 1)
jealous sights on my, I likes it, why?, don't lie u love me right?
fuck this guy, fuck her bride, I'll pee on your mutherfucking eye
don't cry baby, shut the fuck up, nigga sing a lullabye
but you can't sing for shit, neither rap, go and fucking die
I'm aztec and mayan, predict you crashing flight plan
I'm a super sayayin, sign the contract with my dieng pen
if it ain't paintin, I ain't gon tell u how, blood stain the fucking paper
brake you marrow bone, eat the flesh till I see your vains
(yum yum), use the sharpest of my razors
eat the darkest of my raisins, rays penetrate your face
I'm the sun, mutherfucker, raise the entire human raze
six billion muterhfuckers facing death when I say Praise me!
sissys get embarrasment of my simple harassment
I'm biased man, asshole, a fasinating master
keep getting your mouth open, and u gonna catch a punch on it
leave you a concussion when I muthafucking crunch yo clit

(Hook)
Bitch I'm better than you... and you know that
pussy, I'm better than you... and you know that
dont be a fuckin sissy, stand up and say it to me
bitch ass ball sucker, diss me... play it to me
Bitch I'm better than you... and you know that
pussy, I'm better than you... and you know that
say my mutherfucking name, its easy I'll help yee
B.I. to the muthefucking G., A.X. -D

(Verse 2)
they say I can't write like you'd like me to write
well that's right...fuck you... I'll write what I like
punchline the mic, fuck up the frequency line
munch nine millis wont see a freak as me mind
bunch of minds is absent, lunatism's theft
sunshine's my right sense, latitudes's my left
why youre looking at this text like Ax-D showin u
ow you mad now nigga? I shits all over you
so loco you turn so confused focal point ain't you
when I walk into your room, so the locals do
fucking wigger, with no real friends, real life
(looking at my figure, thats what u really like)
you don't like money?? ofcourse, u have none
fucking bum, dumb drums on ya tomb (hum hum)
while I rap above em, like the bee's on polem
the bee gee's call em, tell em u be joinin em
yes, you are the exact cliche of white rappers
gun clappers with no bullets to back em up, ax axe'd this
attack them now, femenins be rapping now
eminems be coming out from every mutherfucking town
try to slaughter my house, nigga you the fucking pigglet
stuttering cuz charles strouse is not a fucking lyricsist
you will never flow as clean as this pieces of feces
if this is shit, please, u wont imagine my disses

(Hook)
Bitch I'm better than you... and you know that
pussy, I'm better than you... and you know that
dont be a fuckin sissy, stand up and say it to me
bitch ass ball sucker, diss me... play it to me
Bitch I'm better than you... and you know that
pussy, I'm better than you... and you know that
say my mutherfucking name, its easy I'll help yee
B.I. to the muthefucking G., A.X. -D

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Also dont forget to check out the new super cypher
Big Ax-D, Kez, C-Riz, Jay-19, Tom Chambers & D.Dubs - Here We Come
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[Emadyville]

The only mixing thing that stood out were the overlays, they seemed to be off, and pretty loud, making it sound at times pretty bad during those overlays. It was more noticable in the 2nd verse, first half of it specifically.

Overall I liked it, you did well with the dark shit, your voice fit it.

The first verse flowed pretty simple, but how you changed it in general and during the 2nd verse made it work well and made the first verse become a good set up verse in my mind. The flow was a litte shaky to start the 2nd verse, because of the pauses, but this part flowed really well and sounded awesome:

why youre looking at this text like Ax-D showin u
ow you mad now *****? I shits all over you
so loco you turn so confused focal point ain't you
when I walk into your room, so the locals do

Hook was pretty cool too, your delivery def made it work. only thing is the transition to the second verse sounded like you just continued rhyming thro the hook into the verse, and the transition ounding continuous took away from the transition itself, if that made sense

Good work tho, you fix the overs, that little flow shit, and the hook transition, this would be solid. As of now tho, def pretty dope, good work

[B.A.D.]

fuck, I new I was missing something on the mix, the stupid damned overlays, I cant believe this lol... before I recorded it I said to myself, watch for the overlays... but damn, youre right. Can't believe I still go through that same shit lmao. But thanks for pointing it out, I wont forget them again lol.
I didnt understood what you meant with the hook transition, sounds normal to me.. there's just some laughin on the back, but thats about it.
anyways, thanks for the feedback man, and specially for pointing out that overlays thing, I will not have that mistake again.

[Emadyville]

what i meant with the transition was, it sounded like the recording was you spitting the hook and then continuing in the same session from the hook to the verse...as opposed to recording the hook seperately, which Im sure you did, it just went into the verse sounding as if it was all one take, which kind of made the hook seem like it never ended, know what I mean?

it just took away from the hook itself, instead of verse, hook, verse it went into the verse so fluently it sounded like verse, hook, and then the hook not stopping.

I hope that made sense this time

[B.A.D.]

what i meant with the transition was, it sounded like the recording was you spitting the hook and then continuing in the same session from the hook to the verse...as opposed to recording the hook seperately, which Im sure you did, it just went into the verse sounding as if it was all one take, which kind of made the hook seem like it never ended, know what I mean?

it just took away from the hook itself, instead of verse, hook, verse it went into the verse so fluently it sounded like verse, hook, and then the hook not stopping.

I hope that made sense this time

oh, lol.. on this track I did everything on one take. verse 1, hook 1, verse 2 and hook 2 on the same recording. i just didnt wanted to waste time stopping and recording and all that, it was pretti easy song to make. but yeah I think I get what youre saying. lol, thanks anyway for your thoughts man haha

[Tranquil]

Wow, this song was great! The mixing was a lil bit off but it didn't ruin the track at all, and i didn't even notice it when i was halfway through the track. On the real, this track kinda in a way inspired me to write some sick lines "punchline the mic, fuck up the frequency line" that line made me go wow

Both verses were fucking good! The flow was great, and the lyrics were just great! If this track had better mixing (not saying the mixing is bad, cause its still good as it now) this track woulda shinned heaps more. I loved the hook, really battle orientated.

I loved this track, and its good that your trying different kinda tracks. You aced this track tho man 5/5

[mdemaz]

Ight bra..
I like the beat...That watery sorta spaced out trance shit is nice.
The lyrics sound a lot more dark then your usual stuff....Something bad happen? You sounded more sadistic and evil in this track.
It fit perfectly with the beat as well.
Something about the chorus got chills up my spine...I'll probably give it a listen on the mp3 player also just to listen properly.
Keep at it dude....You're giving me ideas on how I should approach my new darker flow after all that shit happened to me last month....):....

I'm also keen to jump on some tracks also....After I'm done the metal projects, I'm probably gonna put out like 5 mixtapes and feature a lot in the coming months.

Anyways man, keep at it.

[Static]

Wow, that was amazing. Your voice and flow fits the theme perfectly! And as EminemIsLegend said, the "punchline the mic, fuck up the frequency line" was amazing! I loved the beat too, everything was great! I think the hook could've been a bit more catchy though, but I'm not good at that myself, so I can't really complain. But yeah, awesome job dude! And you have an awesome vocabulary. Keep rapping!

Oh, and btw, could you give me any feedback/advice/tips for this? http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=110689
I would appriciate it, thank you!

[Instant Legend]

pretty interresting track right here, definitely on that horrorcore type of tip, which is cool, i dig that stuff myself - prefer the verses over the hook, but the hook wasnt bad, beat was dynamite, lovin it


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[B.A.D.]

holy oh holy

explicit.- thanks bro, I appreciate your feedback man, very glad u liked it

mdemaz.- lol, nothing bad happened, I'm just experimented hahaha, thanks man, glad you liked it aswell

static.- bro, thank you very very mucho, I appreciate that, I peeped and fed your song

instant.- lol, I like your name. thanks man I appreciate that bro, give me a link to check you out cuz I cant find you, have you posted any yet?? thanks mate

[Maybe]

The beat choice was phenomenal. I don't know if you made this or not, but it's atmospheric. At first, I found your flow to be empty, until about 4 lines in to the first verse. Your emotion is astounding, and you sound angry without distorting your words or taking away from the lyrics. It was easy to understand, and actually flowed well. It was complimented by the contrasted emotions, and your flow in the second verse was impressive. I like the stop-go-stop-go style, it helps break apart the track and adds style to an otherwise dark song.

Overall, the only downside was some of the mixing, but honestly, it was better than most peoples by quite a bit. The only reason I even mention it is because most of your stuff is mixed beautifully.

I give this a 9/10 because it's consistent, and for the style you were going for, near perfect.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

tbh..i heard better from you (no pun)
the only thing standing out is your flow....
delivery is decent but heard better aswell..sounds forced to me
mixing is pretty thick overall..as pointed out..your overlays were pretty bad....
not exactly my fav track of urs....
next time bro

[Mr. Chambers]

this was pretty refreshing from you, becuz you don't normally do this type of track.

beat was sick with it. i really like these airy, dark beats.

like some said it started out pretty basic for like the first 4-6 bars, then it picked up. i also noticed it was very flowy....went from verse to chorus to verse without any real "typical" sound difference, but i actually liked that.

your delivery like always is quite amazing. you got a feirce delivery combined with your accent give it a very dark grimy feel, like some mid-90's hip hop type shit. my type.

lyrics were cool, you never were the most complex but you still get your message across and i can dig that.

overall wasn't much i can critique. i was bumping the song quite a few times this morning. so guess you succeeded in your goal lol

[B.A.D.]

Mc Maybe - Thanks you man, yeah the beat was made by me I still need to get my head around mixing to get out the best quality possible, thanks for your comments man, I appreiate them

Dr. C to the - lmao thanks for your thoughts man, I appreicate that, hmm, I dont know how to not force my delivery tho', but maybe sounds like that beacuse Im not used to making this type of songs

Thomas El Chamba - thanks brother, thats greatly appreciated, yeah I was tryng to get that pre 2000 grime going on hahaha, thanks for noticing that haha

as always, I appreciate your feedback
thanks to everybody that listened, commented or just ghosted and got afraid

[Tornado]

Beat is weird but cool. Different and atmospheric man. I'd only say i only really noticed the mixing in the 1st Verse more because the start was basic like others have said. I don't why i specificly like this track, it's just listenable to me. Not your best overall but good track to bump and replayable