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All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 track)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Apr 5th, '11, 15:24

http://limelinx.com/files/13f9b41222e7b ... 7f1213a385
http://hulkshare.com/tedmkwhk2ea8


i got an "All Of Me" planned for the album too, (5 tracks in, it's coming). I'm also looking for a beat for "Hustle 2 Survive", kind of want it to have the same vibe as the first one, so any suggestions or beats, send them in.

album i'm aiming to release late summer-early/mid fall. Mixtape will come prolly july-august. So look out for those.

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Re: All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 trac

Postby Scrubz » Apr 5th, '11, 16:02

That was amazing, nothing else to really say. Your quality isnt great but u coulda spit that on a mega phone it would still sound dope as hell. Lyrics were great, you picked great words man and they all just flowed nicely together. Loved the beat. Great track it's something that I will actually bump to. :worship:
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Re: All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 trac

Postby Mr. Chambers » Apr 5th, '11, 18:59

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Re: All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 trac

Postby classthe_king » Apr 6th, '11, 00:15

That was dope man, can't wait for this album
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Re: All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 trac

Postby Block » Apr 6th, '11, 09:01

Bro do you use a desser? Your highs are a little too high, that's why you're getting that hiss. Try to lower them in the EQ. Between 7-12k.

Other than that, this is one of your better flows. Your speech was clear and nice, as well. Your emotion, as always, was dope. I like the fact you didn't sound sarcastic in this like you do in most songs (even emotional ones). The emotion fit the song well.


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Re: All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 trac

Postby Mr. Chambers » Apr 7th, '11, 03:33

Good looks bro. Yeah I use desser and a hi reducer. I'm gonna re-record for the tape cuz I slipped up on the flow a lil too.
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Re: All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 trac

Postby Emadyville » Apr 7th, '11, 04:28

That was a solid track throughout, liked it without a hook, beat was dope too. Def felt that "even sleep is a job" line, sadly lol.

Only suggestion is to pick up the delivery a little at the end, like how you started was strong, and it went less angry to more smooth which was nice, the delivery itself was fine throughout...but like how you said 'fucking' in "fucking understand me" in the beginning, I'd try to bring that sound in a few lines near the end so it brings the anger/frustration back up to end strong.

Other than that it was dope :y:
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Re: All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 trac

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 7th, '11, 09:53

so is All Of Me Pt. 1 already released?? I got confused.

I agree with Block, you need to be carefull with those high frequencies, maybe try a different de-esser, but Im not sure if this track is old or not, cuz you showed me one with impecable quality, so lol.. hmm..

I like the lyrics of this song man, and damn you fit the beat really really good, ama try to do something similar. yeah, there's nothing much to feed, this is great. Just keep on working on mixing man.

Also, try making boosting the low freqs of your vocals, make em a bit more bassy, see how that sounds, would be interesting. :y:

I enjoyed it man :y:
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Re: All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 trac

Postby Mr. Chambers » Apr 7th, '11, 13:14

Yea it was on super chambers bros. And I released it on here silly
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Postby Mr. Chambers » Apr 8th, '11, 03:32

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Re: All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 trac

Postby Vettori » Apr 8th, '11, 04:06

I actually enjoyed this alot.. Very direct and clear... No flaws. :y:
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Re: All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 trac

Postby preest » Apr 8th, '11, 11:25

This beat is fucking crazy, I love how the singing voice fits with it, your lyrics sound quite intellegent, the flow was on point and you also had a perfect amount of emotion in it! I really like this track mate, it was real shit loved the "Obama" line - dope bro keep bringing this kinda stuff! :y: :y:
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Re: All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 trac

Postby Mr. Chambers » Apr 9th, '11, 00:35

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Re: All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 trac

Postby Instant Legend » Apr 9th, '11, 09:11

i like the lyricism, as its actually pretty profound in spots, and your infliction manages to match it in most instances.

i would actually like to hear a cut from you with a single adlib, fully doubling your verse, low as hell in the mix, then regular panned adlibs just like i normal.

i think that would put your presence on a crazy level

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Re: All Of Me Pt. 2 -tom chambers (Don't Sign Me Vol. 2 trac

Postby Mr. Chambers » Apr 10th, '11, 17:25

Good looks bro. Ima holla at you about a collab tomorrow since it's my only day off
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