Nefarious- Why Do I Try

[Nefarious]

http://hulkshare.com/d5anrhk67y39

Just recorded this, Enjoy

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[Scrubz]

This was pretty good man. I really liked the structure of the whole song, it flowed very fluidly threw out. Off I had to pick a low point it would be the hook but shit even that was good lol. Keep doing what ur doing and peep my newest song when u get a chance!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

hook sounds really bad man...u r not a singer...xD sorry bro
delivery is top.....flow is solid....lyrics are nice...
your overlays/doubles could be lowered also....just by a little...
but its a nice short track..but yeah hook def went wrong...i think actually some Old Time Radio effect or some would do the job..you know some Johnny Cash type of Oldtimer effect...
hmm lol..anyway you got the delivery and the flow..
just felt like you was a bit lazy on the whole mixing process

[Nefarious]

Thanks for the feed everyone, i honestly thought the chorus would be better but ive been sick so i was worried about the singing myself, i can agree the worst part was the chorus only because i did it wrong, i shouldve redone it a bit better but im a man of few takes, i usually just do my songs really quick and they end up how i wanted them, but i can hear how my voice wasnt as fluent as it shouldve been on the chorus.

[Scrubz]

The most important thing I've learned in my short time of recording is that it's best to take your time. You could listen right after and be like that's dope then the next day u might ge a different feeling. Even though it's just a song, it will be here for ever and it reflects you.

That being said posting it here is great cuz you will get honest opinions and you can go back and fix stuff.

[preest]

for starters this track is on a vibe that like, the depressed confusion type thing, its a common topic in hip hop, I felt the verses were dope, the multies were nice and it all flowed well. I liked the melody of the hook but wasnt sure on your singing on it, maybe if it was layered a few more times it might work?? I'm not sure but as an overall track I felt it was certainly dope, kinda let down by the hook but it didnt matter too much!! dope keep recording bro, I'll be looking out for the new shit!

[Nefarious]

I think i may have to redo the chorus, with more layers and in a different voice, as i intended to do it in the first place, its even harder to get it right on the first try since while i write i tend to whisper and when i record i tend to speak louder, for privacy reasons lol., but still thanks everyone for the comments.

[WakeUpShow]

don't listen to them, the hook is ace. The beat is so simplistic yet uplifting. Everything flows so well and feels so clean. You have professional quality.

[Instant Legend]

thoroughly enjoyed this joint

beat is great

your voice and delivery work perfectly on this beat, imo

but the hook, thats the big winner, shit is catchy and you capture the half sing half rap delivery very well

dopeness

check me out

[gutawafang]

Nefarious is good.

[Vettori]

definatly a dope song. Chorus is my favourite.
Can't wait for a mixtape or something

[WesTMusiK]

DAMN, this song is dope, man.

Lyrics - Dope
Flow - Dope
Delivery - DOPE

The only thing I didn't feel was the hook, you definitely aren't a singer, homie, haha. No disrespect, though.

Stay up, man. Can't wait for more songs.

[Nefarious]

Thankyou everyone i appreciate it and special thanks to vettori for randomly commenting lol didnt make much sense to comment when you've already told me the same thing everytime ive played this.
lol