Preest - Blinded

[preest]

This track was something I really felt I wanted to make, it's basically aimed at all of those that are guilty of leaving Hip Hop as a culture behind and they are blinded by the money and fame that they have gained, as a result the whole game is dying....

I hope you like it...

Preest - Blinded - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D4Mfa7Qf6jU

link of feedback - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=111396

and comments are appreciated...thanks in advance

[Scrubz]

So the concept was good, not original but it was good. your lyrics were solid, but them along with the rhymes were kinda simple. Flow was great in some spots, choppy in others. Hook, yeah not feelin it. Fav. line was " shit we use to feel your raps, but that deal musta went and kill your tracks". Delvery and emotion was great as always.

All in all this was not one of your best, it was above average but you have put out much better Mind peepin my track?

[Nefarious]

I liked the content to and the chorus wasnt bad, i rarely listen to rappers with accents or any rappers at all really, but still you kill verses with a good sound, your voice works well the way you use it and flow was pretty much proper all the way through, good track, thanks for the feed on my song, im glad you did, so that i got to listen to this and pay respect back.

[creation]

Personally i think this is one of your best tracks mate, (not lyrically) But your deliverance, presence emotion and message was sound. Im really feeling this.

[WesTMusiK]

I liked the concept, too. But it wasn't really a rare subject to use so the song loses creativity points, sorry.

The flow was good, delivery was pretty good aswell.

Just work on timing your dubs 'cause sometimes you start them too early or too late and it makes it seem all cluttered.

Other than that, I was really feeling this one. 3.5/5. Keep it up, homie.

[Instant Legend]

he takin a nice stab at the mainstream

i feel you, i think a LOT of shit is really watered down nowadays

love your presence on the track, compliments your accent well

what im really diggin about this cut is the chorus, which gives this joint a somewhat eerie feeling

dope work

check me out

[preest]

Thanks for commenting people, I'm glad this is getting mixed reviews cos it shows that people are truthfull, I get mostly good reviews for my other tracks and I'm glad that you guys are telling it how it is!! I'm happy with the track and I'm really happy with the reviews so far, I'm glad people are enjoying it

still uppin on feedback!

[Mr. Chambers]

i could really dig everything on here except the chorus wasn't good at all

the flow was pretty spot on, delivery was cool and unique and lyrics were pretty good.

nothing much negative to say. just keep it up

[EvolXYZ]

Delivery/Content is on point. Only thing I'd say to do, is invest in your setup.
You can get a COMPLETE professional setup for under $300.