First id like to say-Album art is incredible...Good job to whoever did that.very professional
Second, Forgive my punctuation for i don't care because i wanted to write what i felt haha.
Comming home- Definatly alot of quotables. verses are solid. and the chorus worked well it had a nice vibe..
Production was ok, Not a favourite i think if produced under more professional circumstances it could have been better,
and your quality is a huge Kick in the side..
I really want to enjoy this for what it is..not have to pause to hear the odd thing i missed...
Good track man, On to the next
Pressing on- Lyrically Justified. Seemed like a dim track. That Hook could be HUUUUUUUUUGE, i mean Huge if you chose other words then "Ima make it"....Love the Melody.
Glad your music has good content and not that regular Bull shit im used to hearing.
Who was the girl.. was the hook a sample ?
Come correct- amazing beat...old fashioned feel with the sample.
wish your content was stronger on this.I Beg for you to reveal more emotion in your songs..
I think it's really an issue of quality though...if you were presented with professional equipment.
i think you'd be Much better.(even your motivation would increase)
when i recorded on shit quality...i put in a shit amount of effort..i cant say the same about you since people operate differant..
But i hope sometime soon, you can invest in some mixing lessons.
I have a 60 dollar mic, and 60 dollar mixer. computer was $1000
the rest was in the mixing... Please in the future, because i am a fan and would like to hear your music more often.
try to take this into consideration
If you say so- avoid the simple "metaphores" / "similies" "Mold me like Playdo"
i liked the rhyme scheme. hate the beat..but thats cause ive heard it before lol.>.<
"if you say no, what you say means fuck all"-(cant make out the rest) but sounds sick.
Not the highlight of your tape, but it's good.
make ends meet- That beat is BOSS. Holy shit, Loving it already...so far your best verse in terms of sound & quality.
"I am hatred and failure both personafied"....DUDE WOW Hook is FIREE !!!!! Push this song...shit son...
You need to work with this style more...it is IN. This is you.
"Cause lifes a set of Jaws" AHHHHH Crazy lines homie.
WOW almost every line if not every line is done with such perfection...If your tape doesnt go on my ipod this Will.(not discrediting it)
but you need to know the level this song is on.(exceeds expectations) 20/10
Worth my time- Productions dope..haha Big ups to mart..dudes on some next shit.
i feel this tape picking up right now. Two songs really worth mentioning.
Holy shit dude, dope wordplay.
Your content is strong. Hope you keep working hard like this.
Told myself- that beat reminds me of somthing ive heard..i forget what.. Not a big fan of the chorus..
haha this topics jokes. put them bitches on blast."i see the change in people" line was going somewhere huge but you fell off on the flow >.<
sall good...still a great song. your verses got stronger as it played.
Without you- productions great. love the detail in the beat.
there's the energy i wanted to see. it peaks alot and has its quality issues,overall it's a great preformance.
not to many standout lines here.your preformance heald this one together
out of reasons- i like where the chorus was going...But vocally you need to work on it.
Dope first verse.great finish to the verse.
the chorus sounded better the second time around. But you need to polish it up more for future projects
actually an impressive verse from ax. Good vibe.
i feel your second verse. very real words.
Jagged pill- Not much to say about it, The chorus is great. Verses were amazing, I think there was only one line i didnt enjoy.
the rest was fire though. wow the chime at the end of the beat was dope, Real song.
Poisen- didnt like the intro/chorus so much..
Concept is easily relatable.I Liked the verses
i think another beat would have complimented it better.
undecided- Wooooo dopeness. like that flow change
"Effect on it, till nothings left of it"
forgive my ignorance but whatever was said in that section..was great..Chorus is amazing...
another quotable song. Send this one around as well. or make a video.
When the music stops- That beat is deep. Don't like remixes/samples ugh pet peeve.
haha dude i love how you write... shits intense.. the odd time you slip up..but theres so many things right it doesnt matter..
if you really cracked down you could be easily one of the best on here.
Tell me why- great start to finish, i hate how the beat stayed the same all the way. Just looped.
im a sucker for build ups.
chorus was on some next shit.. ideally it's awsome but could have been preformed better.
the transition from verse to chorus reminded me of Over. it almost seems like a differant beat.
hmm takes getting used to.
verses are your highlight.
breathe- Whoa thats a real song homie.
loved the beat buildup, and you kept it strong throughout
Chorus is dope. i like how your about awareness.
keep doing music justice
Foresight- wordplay and lyrics were dope..quality again steps this one down.
this tape is incredible. Glad i downloaded it. i'm putting a few selected favourites on the ipod.
Way to kill it Homie.