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Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 22nd, '11, 05:36

so, I started work on yet another album, havent recorded anything yet, Im gonna practice flow n lyric n shit before I get to the actual recording. the album will be called "AFTERLIFE"
so in the meantime, here's a new practice track of mine:

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Produced by me :y:

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Lyrics:

(Dave Chappelle)
you know...
Sometimes we're Not prepared for Adveristy

(verse 1)
One wise man once gave me an advice
almost went wide without sayin thin lies
"swing when the ball comes" at least thats what I
made up out of the mumbles, needless to say I
built up, strong, machines fear its creator
moshpits on pop concerts, shits on the nature
frostbits on the fire, flames come celebrating
its rainin nations dropping chains of radiation
sexy lady in my thoughts, masturbated to her image
Sophie is sophisticated, my philosophy's damaged
pay homage to me, before your bones turn a fossil
and start to smell like sulfur, this carnage's hustle
I'm consitpaded Sophie help me build up muscle
but I'm sophistical, I'll just land in Roswell
so wet, like your pussy, little kitten so smushy
play me then we kushin', Mary Jane eatin sushi

(Hook)
I just wanna know how little the sound can go
riddle the mouth of your thoughts and turn louder or
renovate lada, I wanna call now my mamma
get rid of all crap, there's adversity mamma

(Dave Chappelle)
you know...
Sometimes we're Not prepared for Adveristy

(verse 2)
connection lost......... .. keep waiting
perfection must......... .. Behave haha
be a skywalker like anakin, or turn into a manequin
be harley Quin to Joker, panicing
I want to dance again, nigga fill my platter man
I'm turning to a Spiderman, oh no that Fag again
Woof Woof, Slaughterhouse full of wolves
wolverhampton turned to wool houla hoops
I was jelous of yelawolf till I heard he was hella good
like umbrellas on skeletons, cuz its rainin now elephants
in the room. I'm so ellocuent
methophors come like seraphin
angels catapult to sarah palin and her relatives
who won't let her poo... smellin her doo doo
like, what the fuck is she eating??? you?
hah... punches, nah, I munch on you muthafuckaz
bunch of glock suckas, swallow bullets down your throat

(Hook)
I just wanna know how little the sound can go
riddle the mouth of your thoughts and turn louder or
renovate lada, I wanna call now my mamma
get rid of all crap, there's adversity mamma

(Dave Chappelle)
you know...
Sometimes we're Not prepared for Adveristy

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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 22nd, '11, 06:32

Wow bro, this was an awesome track. The rhyming was spectacular, especially in the 2nd verse, particularly the middle towards end. VERY catchy shit bro, and your flow was just banging. Can't find anything to complain about other than your pronunciation could be a bit better at times.

Hot track man!
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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 22nd, '11, 09:07

haha thanks Steve, I appreciate that man :worship: :worship: :worship:

thanks for listening and commenting :y:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 22nd, '11, 14:54

Big Ax-D wrote:haha thanks Steve, I appreciate that man :worship: :worship: :worship:

thanks for listening and commenting :y:

No doubt bro!
I was jelous of yelawolf till I heard he was hella good
like umbrellas on skeletons, cuz its rainin now elephants

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I really like that part, haha.
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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby Trimss » Apr 22nd, '11, 15:44

be a skywalker like anakin, or turn into a manequin
be harley Quin to Joker, panicing
I want to dance again, ***** fill my platter man
I'm turning to a Spiderman, oh no that Fag again


I liked this part, the rhyming was awesome. :y:

Your flow was tight and you can ride the beat. That hook was really great, i'm bumping your song. :y:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby preest » Apr 23rd, '11, 23:41

Well what can I say bro, you did it again!! lyrically I thought it started off weak but as the 1st verse went on I could see the direction of the track and it all made sense!! the flow and the melody of it was damn near perfect and that hook was catchy as fuck!! congrats bro, SICK! hit me up if you ever want a verse from me! :y: :y:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby Scrubz » Apr 24th, '11, 02:13

Beat was cool, but the drum kit kinda sounded toy ish to me. I agree with preest about how it started off kinda week but once you got into it you killed it! Hook was good imo, nice and catchy but nothing crazy :y:. Second verse picked up were the first left off, and you again killed it. The umbrella bit was impressive lyrically. 8.5/10 :worship: Dope shit man. Hope to collab in the future once again! :y:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 24th, '11, 03:33

preest wrote::


hahaha thanks brother I appreciate your comments man :worship: :worship: Im glad you liked it, and sure man, we should get on the booth sometime same with Scrubz :y:

Trimss wrote::


thank you my dude, keep bumping it fella :worship: :worship: :worship: thanks for listening

Scrubz wrote::

thats what I was aiming for with the Drum Kit lol, make it toy-ish, like the melody itself haha.
thanks a lot for the comments bro :worship: :worship: :b: :b: cheers man. :y:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby Le Tunisien » Apr 24th, '11, 12:05

i think anyone would agree that ax has the greatest hook here :worship: and i liked the rhyming scheme it seems like you tried to do a lil change, that worked..but i enjoy more your flow you used in that song " look in my eyes " do some shit like that again man :b: :8)
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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 25th, '11, 03:43

le tunisien wrote:i think anyone would agree that ax has the greatest hook here :worship: and i liked the rhyming scheme it seems like you tried to do a lil change, that worked..but i enjoy more your flow you used in that song " look in my eyes " do some shit like that again man :b: :8)


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thats whats up brotha haha, thanks a lot for the feed man, greatly appreciated :worship: :y: :wave:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby Tranquil » Apr 25th, '11, 15:08

Alright, first off i loved the beat, nice and laid back kinda feel to it, great! Holy shit, the rhyming in this song is insane man! "I was jelous of yelawolf till I heard he was hella good like umbrellas on skeletons, cuz its rainin now elephants" Fucking loved it, loved the hook man, havnt heard a hook from you that i didnt like. The delivery was really good, nice clean vocals. The flow was Really Really good, spot on throughout the song, didnt fall off once! I dont have one thing to complain about this song, fucking 10/10 :worship:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 26th, '11, 04:28

:o :o

My brotha, thanks a lot man, Im glad you liked it :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:

thanks everybody for the awsome comments :y:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby CorrosionCover » Apr 26th, '11, 09:43

This won't sneak in here without my attention......

What i like about your music, that it doesn't get repetitive and furthermore this track is just a mega blast. Fuck this, i will listen to it along with Eminem when on the way to school lol. If you make a tour, please visit Cracow !

The chorus owned completely.
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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby mdemaz » Apr 26th, '11, 13:45

Big D ripping shit up as usual...This dude has really grown on me in the past few months.
I'm just that average punk rocker dude that raps so what do I know...AlI know is that this is good music.
I can see myself bumping D at more parties when this tape drops.
Flow is flawless and the beat is out of control.
D tames it quiet well while not compromising his lyrical themes.
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Re: Big Ax-D - Adveristy

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 27th, '11, 07:29

CorrosionCover.- thanks a bunch bro, I appreciate those comments, means a lot man :worship: :worship: :worship: thank you, and I'd love to visit Cracow!!... :worship: :worship:

mdemaz.- lol, youre the first person to call me D, lmao :y: thank you man, I really appreciate your thoughts and Im very glad you liked it...

thanks to everyone again :worship: :worship: :worship:

damn, this is one Hot song apparently :happy:

thanks again to everyone :worship:
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