Nefarious - Falling

[Nefarious]

I just recorded this lastnight, just wanna get some opinion's from other people, its pretty depressing like most of my songs, but im still really happy how this turned out in the ending.

http://hulkshare.com/4gt1k645qj1b

Lyrics

Verse 1

The way i think, is impossible, how i live with it, i dont know.
Im addicted to, finding hope, it exists and im, trying so.
Hard to get to a, higher road, but im, dying inside i know.
Im as cold, as if i were to go, to lye in a, pile of snow.
Silent at certain times, i try to be perfect, im.
In a puzzle, and every person alive, has a purpose, mine.
Is defiant, im unreliable, why is it, im the only one.
Crying, i cant desribe it all, never, i dont feel regular.
Always, i'll either, fly or fall forever, for the better.
I guess, it just never, ends for me ever, im in the centre.
Of all this and i call apon all the power i have in me.
How is it that im sad when im happy id rather magically.
Balance it out insted i just settle with what it had to be.
Shattering every dream, that i grab, im at, zero gravity.
Falling, into insanity, calling out, for your hand.
Can you hear me, or am i gone, will i ever be me again.

Chorus

I feel like im falling.
With noone to catch me.
Im feeling it always.
I'll never be happy.

Why do i feel like im falling.
Noone to catch me.
Feeling it always.
Never be happy.

I feel like im falling.

Verse 2

Im under pressure all the time, in the world.
Couldnt make me fine, im concernced.
If i make that climb i might slip when i get to high.
What i speak is what i rely on to keep me from bieng ryan.
Nefarious is the only one i depend apon i am him.
Recently ive been trying, to call him out of his hiding.
Conbine our effort together and put our differnce aside.
If we do this i know well make it, its finally been decided.
If we can just take that risk, that we know weve always been eyein.
Insted of feel like im falling i wanted it to be flying.
Im haunted inside my mind and regardless of what i rhyme.
I make progress with every line show my honesty every time.
I no longer feel like im dying inside of my house im hiding.
Ive lied to myself so i dont see reason for even trying
Im finding it hard to shed any tears when i feel like crying.
Until i get to be silent, again then i know who i am.
Im hoping that i can hold in the feeling of bieng violent.
Revealing a sleeping demon who's devious and defiant.
And i went insane i couldnt even keep in a giant.
Ammount of my true secrets, leaving a room speachless.
Someone who's so unique that i knew you would soon seek this.

Verse 3

I never asked to be this sad and depressed.
But everyday i feel a pain its like a stab in my chest.
I cant complain but i can say that i was happy with less.
I try to keep it all contained but always snap when im stressed.
I thought that i could run away but im so trapped in this mess.
That i just feel i have to stay as i look after the rest.
Im so afraid that they may go through a catastrophe next.
As i go back to regrets i know it has to be this.
I've always had to be pissed, i cant imagine myself.
Bieng anything other than it, im a hazard to health.
So if you think that you should pity me be glad for yourself.
Cuz you can live a life i live with only half of the help.
Im not the person, that i see, when i, look into the mirror.
Im much worse than, i really appear, i see clear.
Or a different feeling that i never knew how to phrase.
But it was telling me something i better do now today.
Or i would never get a chance, to get it again.
Someone tell me how can i advance and let it begin.
When my opinion doesnt matter to people and im so invisable.
My life is never equal its evil and unforgiveable.
Nothing is ever easy or as hard as it seems.
I know you wouldnt want to be me or a part of my dreams.
To know exactly what its like to have a heart of a fiend.
The very second that i woke up i just started to scream.

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[°[~CHR!$~]°]

lyrics definitly standing out...great job here..
first i was like uh..but you keep constantly building this song....1st verse < 2nd verse < 3rd verse
my fav part was

Im finding it hard to shed any tears when i feel like crying.
Until i get to be silent, again then i know who i am.
Im hoping that i can hold in the feeling of bieng violent.
Revealing a sleeping demon who's devious and defiant.
And i went insane i couldnt even keep in a giant.
Ammount of my true secrets, leaving a room speachless.
Someone who's so unique that i knew you would soon seek this.

hook was mixed very well...but also very basic imo..i heard those high hook overlays you did...the ME/HAPPY you know..i could imagine them being a notch louder...
otherwise as i said...song is building up gettin better and better...

[Mr. Chambers]

this song is pretty epic...nothing i didn't like imo a perfect 5/5

i'd really like to collab in the future.

[B.A.D.]

this is good stuff man, like chambers said, pretti epic track... very professional from your part. lyrics are controlled perfectly and on structure. just probably the layovers a bit too loud... but its hella dope. I loved the hook now, some places might have gone out of tune, but its really nothing that makes you quit listening... but this was a great song man. You really got into vibe in here... and third verse is brill.

great job man... and congratz on reachong +20 posts haha, now you dont have to wait for me to approve them lol.... just make sure you keep posting cuz your music is really good

[gutawafang]

I almost teared at the third verse.

Holy shit. You're holy motherfucking awesome man.

I don't have to breakdown or shit like that. You're prolly on Cryptic Wisdom's level man.

[Nefarious]

Thanks everyone, lotsa positive comments