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Bad Weather Ft. HP (produced by 2deep)

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Bad Weather Ft. HP (produced by 2deep)

Postby Mr. Chambers » May 4th, '11, 01:41

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Re: Bad Weather Ft. HP (produced by 2deep)

Postby Mr. Chambers » May 5th, '11, 09:26

Y'all suck
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Re: Bad Weather Ft. HP (produced by 2deep)

Postby Vettori » May 6th, '11, 21:33

I like the beat...definatly a favourite from you so far.
The idea of the chorus Was dope... But your vocal range cant hit it well..the "run away" part was done correctly.Should concider getting someone on it who can do it justice.
could be strong..second verse was weak. like he was rapping with a pillow attacthed to his head.
lol...Watch your ft.s ;)

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Re: Bad Weather Ft. HP (produced by 2deep)

Postby B.A.D. » May 7th, '11, 02:34

lmao at the intro :worship:

lol... damn, you and kez really need to make a collab, you guys have around 6 tracks on the same beats lmao... New Millenium Dream :shifty: :shifty: :shifty: ohshit!!! its happening. lol

I agree with vettori, the chorus is fucking fucking sick. and the mixing of it specially.. make sure to do it like that on the album on this typa hooks... and yeah... u can use autotune and use it as a guide.. I dunno

hmm, and yeah HP... damn, that was really bad lol.. from the lyrics to the delivery to the flow, that was straight up trash.. but I apologize if he's learning, but you are on a higher level tho'... I dunno.

yeah I liked it... you did good :y:
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Re: Bad Weather Ft. HP (produced by 2deep)

Postby Mr. Chambers » May 7th, '11, 09:40

I'm working with him on his style. By the time I'm done he'll be at least on a middleweight level
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Re: Bad Weather Ft. HP (produced by 2deep)

Postby Scrubz » May 7th, '11, 17:36

Beat was dope, the simplicity was great. Your verse was sick, I really liked it a lot. The hook was good but idk it may have been layered poorly imo, and the ad libs were way to loud. Hp was almost unlistenable, its like he bit you "lazy-ish" delivery but made it sound boring a dull, he sounds like he's reading off a piece of paper. He needs alot more emotion. If you did the entire song I think it would have been a classic but hp ruined it for me.

Damn that melody in the hook is sick... The lyrics and flow in the hook as good but liked i said i dont think it was layered correctly.

Good on your part, not so good on hp's part.
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Re: Bad Weather Ft. HP (produced by 2deep)

Postby Wreck » May 8th, '11, 10:19

wasn't feelin it bro, honestly. the lyrics were ok, beat was nice, flow was ok, keep grindin man.
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Re: Bad Weather Ft. HP (produced by 2deep)

Postby Instant Legend » May 15th, '11, 20:52

for me, this shit was pretty hot, intro made me lol, then u can in with a fairly unique delivery, and you sounded pretty comfortable on the slower tempo

really dug the hook

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