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[NEW] Half Of It - WesT

Postby WesTMusiK » May 7th, '11, 00:09

Check out the new song guys! Sorry I haven't posted in awhile. Had ALOT of shit to take care of.

Anyways, let me know what you think of the track!

Half Of It - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y4xVkTXAHL4

Link Of Feedback - http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=111396&p=1615191#p1615191
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Re: [NEW] Half Of It - WesT

Postby WesTMusiK » May 7th, '11, 21:20

C'mon guys. Please give me some feedback.
Emotions get the best of me, the thought of you stresses me
Love me and break me, that's the fuckin' recipe
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Re: [NEW] Half Of It - WesT

Postby B.A.D. » May 8th, '11, 05:53

I like the beat, although is mixed a little weird, the melody is nice.. what I dont really like on here is your voice... sound very exaggerated to me and a little bit tireing. what I do like is the quality of your vocals, very clean, very clear...

I dont know, didnt liked it too much to be very honest. the lyrics are really cool, and the hook is really good. but I dont like your delivery and flow too much.. sorry man... :(
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Re: [NEW] Half Of It - WesT

Postby mdemaz » May 8th, '11, 06:28

Hey breh...
I liked the beat..The cut was fucking brilliant...Little tip, try to take breaths in at a timed interval lol..That's one of the main problems rappers face..They stay on beat, but because they flow like 4 words inside one step, it messes it up..Good shit though man..You're gonna be big one day..And I'll be glad to have witnessed it.
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Re: [NEW] Half Of It - WesT

Postby Instant Legend » May 15th, '11, 20:23

i like this the flow felt a tiny forced in spots, but overall i think its reaaly pretty dope

love the beat

i could soak it up for days

keep it movin!
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Re: [NEW] Half Of It - WesT

Postby TheOfficialThomas » May 17th, '11, 04:20

Dope song WesT!
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Re: [NEW] Half Of It - WesT

Postby Tranquil » May 17th, '11, 11:38

Fuck, i thought that i fed this. Anyway i fucking LOVED this song, the lyrics are great, and i love the concept, Real Life Shit!! :worship: :worship:
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Re: [NEW] Half Of It - WesT

Postby mceddie » May 17th, '11, 21:38

really really deep shit, man. i really felt your emotions were real the whole song, plus that beat is sick. keep it up!
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Re: [NEW] Half Of It - WesT

Postby preest » May 19th, '11, 00:53

I was feeling the beat, I could hear myself rapping over a beat like that!! your voice didnt seem to keep the same tone throughout I dont know just didnt sound solid, the lyrics were emotional and I love the concept of the track!! I just felt it maybe could have been delivered a little better I give it a 6.5/10

I've heard much better tracks from you bro, so it might just not be to my taste

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Re: [NEW] Half Of It - WesT

Postby Element. » May 20th, '11, 00:15

This sounds sick, awesome beat, can feel the emotion in the vocals, really dope lyrics love listening to this! keep it up :y:


Just askin where did you get the beat from if you could set me with the link that would be cool :worship:
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