Gotta Know (Remix)

[TripleNineThree]

Link I fed - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=118504&p=1697669#p1697669

Song - http://www.zshare.net/audio/926622178be19f4d/

Verse 1 - J-Kling

Veres 2 - Ajuda

Verse 3 - Me

Lyrics for verse 3
Look, Homie it ain't easy
Speakin' to the world but they don't recieve me

Turn on the TV Christ lookin' cheesy
Father would you lead me cuz they don't wanna see me

If I was like Jeezy the world would please me
But the world is needy, and yes they need He

But they pop out the CD cuz it ain't greedy
We try to give em Creezy they'd rather bump weezy

Lookin' at us crazy this life ain't daisys
Satan tryin' play me but he won't break me

I use to bump Shady, 50, and Jay-Z
Spiritually hazy but Jesus saved me

These people debate me and underate the
God who made me go ahead and hate me!


Drop a link and I'll return the feed!

[WesTMusiK]

This is alright. Work on the rhyming more, though. It seems kind of always predictable.

But it's not BAD BAD. 3/5.

[TripleNineThree]

Thanks for the feed fam!

[Nick. Y]

I too agree, that you need to work more on your lyrics, in order to gain more creativeness. It ain't a bad drop I guess.. I wasn't feelin the beat much, as it sounded rather incomplete and fading

[B.A.D.]

yo bro, do you mind uploading to hulkshare or something else, cuz zshare doesnt work on my browser (and many member's browser aswell)

[classthe_king]

My bad for taking so long to return feed...I went right to your verse


First off, your vocals are too low, I can't really understand you. Outside of that this track is dope. Rhymes are a little simple but it's all good. Your delivery is great and goes perfectly with the beat and your flow never slips up. Good job man.