Sentus- The Funeral

[classthe_king]

Went with a new style. Show it to your friends, post it on your facebook, anything will help.



http://www.facebook.com/SentusMusic7

http://hulkshare.com/ubr0acvrf3s1

http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=120554&p=1709655#p1709655

[Tash8]

this is great work man, I like the concept and no joke that ending line gave me the shakes. Lyrically some brilliant work, storytelling is great and the imagery was nice. Your flow was good but shaky, I suggest taking your verses and rapping to a very fast beat that way it becomes natural. The hook was okay but it could have been much better imo, not very catchy but it got the point done.

Good shit man

[B.A.D.]

Damn!! your quality sounds really fucking nice in here. Seems like either you are recording somewhere else or you switched up the mixing. cuz this is perfect quality.

Man, this song is awsome.... shit, I think this could be my favourite material from you, It normally takes me a while to get into your stuff cuz most of the times there's nothing that really pulls one in... but this one man... this fucking song... brilliant

the best thing is how you structured your writings, perfect job.

5 stars

[dR3]

Wow. I wasn't aware that you're good at storytelling at all. This was amazing, I love the way you executed the hook, I think it worked great. Can't really say much about the lyrics, it's obvious that they're top notch. You had a few minor slips with your flow, but picked it back up fast enough.

I would really like to hear more track like this from you, instead of the usual multi/punchline tracks/verses you've been posting. Keep it up dude!

[Suicide]

Your voice kind of annoys me, but you can't change that.

Great rhyming and great storytelling. I really liked the chorus. I really enjoyed the production as well.

Sadistik is an influence on you, right? I can feel a Sadistik vibe from this.

[Scrubz]

Ha reading the coments this seems to be your best to date. Will edit with a feed when I'm home from work.

EDIT: You went hard bro, shits good very poetic. Reminds me of Atmosphere. Deff your best song by far. I already herd you new quality so its nothing surprising, your flow is great here, really rode the beat nice. Nothin else to say but once i get our collab out we gotta do a story telling type track

[classthe_king]

Thanks for all of the kind words, it means a lot

[Robbie G]

I loved it. I enjoy you deep/story-telling tracks more than you punchlines tracks.

[VenomBlackViper]

Great track man, this proves you can make a wide array of songs instead of just punchline tracks (though I do like those more). Your delivery really added onto this too, especially how you delivered the last bar of your last verse with that force to end it off perfectly.

As someone said above this was very Atmosphere like, didn't really remind me of Sadistik though since his shit is more poem like whereas you told a story.

[iain08]

this reminded me of 12 shots by diabolic. not the actual content, but the beat and whole feel and shit.

[Tornado]

Best track you done period. Only thing i can say is on the chorus, the delay came in to early and one single echo would've hit home but fuck it, thats petty shit as everything comes together perfectly, from the rhyme structure to the eerie beat to the way you paint the picture. You got the feel captured perfectly which is the most important part

[BumShiv]

This some goodshit bro lol The storytelling and lyrics were really great. The hook was really dope imo and i liked the concept. Overall,

Please feedback when you can

viewtopic.php?f=69&t=121495

[Instant Legend]

i love the storytelling aspect of this track, shit is fire - like your voice too, it works real well with this beat - no complaints from me here, this one is bad ass!

check me out!

[classthe_king]

Damn, thanks for listening guys

[AbramIsaac]

I really like this track.

Your focus on lyricism didn't get in the way of the story, and that is the key to the balancing act of rhyming vs content.

There are very few slip-ups in delivery. The only thing I would do is change the delay, as was noted earlier. If it came in a little later to match your cadence, it would be perfect.

Great job, Sentus.