Thomas Swanson & Eedee "It Will Be Alright"

[Eedee]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9tPQay4i ... re=related

My producer and I have finished this track! The lyrics are in the video. This deals with teenage suicide, but tries to shine it with a positive light and a pertinent message. I've been to the point of suicide (stupid teenage feelings and shit like that...) so my first verse is true. I rap the first verse and Thomas Swanson raps the second verse, and the chorus. This is a Thomas Swanson beat and production!

Hope you guys enjoy!

Eedee.

Link of Feed: viewtopic.php?f=69&t=121822

[BumShiv]

Of course another sick Swanson beat The chorus was really good Your lyrics were great but i felt like you were off beat. I think you were rapping too fast. Swanson verse was great and i liked it better than yours Overall, it was a good song

oh and please feed me back
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[Eedee]

Of course another sick Swanson beat The chorus was really good Your lyrics were great but i felt like you were off beat. I think you were rapping too fast. Swanson verse was great and i liked it better than yours Overall, it was a good song

oh and please feed me back
viewtopic.php?f=69&t=121970

Thanks for that. And too fast? When I was recording I felt like it was in slo-mo... I'm used to rapping fast. But whatever. Thanks for the info and I'll feed your track in a second!

Thanks for the feed dude. Hopefully it sends across the good message!

[BumShiv]

np bro and idk im not great at detecting on things wrong with raos and how to fix them.

[Eedee]

np bro and idk im not great at detecting on things wrong with raos and how to fix them.

No worries.

And in your review, I have to agree with you. I like his verse more than mine

[kotharapgod]

The lyrics in the song and the flow of the song are cool but the effects on the verse dont sound good to me. The Echo at the end of the first verse sound a little off. But besides that, its a good song wit a nice cool vibe. Good job. Keep it up. I'll be listening.

[Eedee]

Thanks for the reviews guys!

This was our second track together! We've been constantly learning off of each other and learning each other's strengths and weaknesses and whatnot, so hopefully our future tracks will sound better! Thanks for the input though!