Sentus - Angel's Caw (Feat. Tom Chambers & Solace) (Remix)

[Solace]

Sentus redid his verse, Tom's verse and hook were kept, and I did a bridge and replaced Emadyville's verse.

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[Bridge] x2
You were perfect with your hateful flaws,
I want to go right back to the start,
You can sing every angels' caw,
Sing it loud enough just to shatter my heart.

[Verse 3: Solace]
I look into the past and I'm seeing every scar made,
I feel my chest as I bleeding to the heartbreak,
I can smile but my mood is doubtful,
What the fuck am I going to do without you?
Sitting here as I cling to my sanity,
And with my dying breath I will sing to my family,
A swan song where the melody is perfect,
The pitch will serenade you 'til my memory is burned in,
Your thick skull, so remember me on purpose,
And with my dying breath I guess I never seemed so worth it,
I bet you never thought it's true that I had cared,
You carried on yourself although you knew that I was there,
Now it's true and I'm aware that I'm left beat,
I spent forever looking for you and you left me,
You stole my heart and you stabbed when it beat,
But that's okay if you ain't happy with me.

Constructive criticism or just "Hey, I (dis)like the track" is fine with me.

[Eedee]

I don't even know what I'm supposed to say in this feedback. You kill it again. Flawless lyrics, delivery, everything. (Guess what I'll be listening to for a few days straight to try an improve?)

[Solace]

Always appreciated, I'm glad you'll bump this track. Keep tuning in

[Solace]

Bump.

[Jaz]

This shit is fuckin' dope! Not really feelin' the hook that much, but shiiit.

Sentus murdered verse one and the bridge is dope as fuck.
Chambers murdered verse two.
Not really feeling the bridge before your verse though, but your verse recovers it again.

This is one of the best tracks I've listened to on TR. Wish it wasn't a remix already so I could hop on the remix lmao..

This could be a 10/10 with just a few tweaks (hook, bridge before your verse)

[Solace]

Well thank you Jaz, I'm really glad you enjoyed listening. Yeah, I don't really like the hook myself, though I'm cool with my own bridge. Appreciate the feedback.

[l33chie]

Yo this shit is sick!

I personally like verse one a lot lol


The beat is sick! The lyrics are on point, I have nothing negative to say really!

I give this a 9/10

10/10 if the hook was a lil better!

[Solace]

What do you think of my verse, and bridge (That's pretty much the only reason I posted it) ?

Thanks for checking it, glad you liked it!

[l33chie]

What do you think of my verse, and bridge (That's pretty much the only reason I posted it) ?

Thanks for checking it, glad you liked it!

Honestly, I think it's good, the transition between it and the verse 3 was smooth. The verse was great! I have no complains or any negative comments about it.

[Solace]

Well thanks man

[mdemaz]

Weird intro,......
Uhh...Oh there's the verse, holy shit, sounds really dark.
Great quality..

Yo, I could learn a lot from all this really, trying to mimic this vocal quality will be my next step.

Great track.

Pianos gave me goosebumps.

[Solace]

Daps on feed, didn't really expect anyone else to check this.

[B.A.D.]

oh lol its you.
I thought it was you just Bumping the old one.

lol wtf? at the comments, this Coleon guy really hates me doesnt he??, lol, I think I've never even crossed word with him.

I'll only feed your verse:

oh, hmm, I'm not feeling the flow at the begining, sounds to me a bit off-beat. When your pick up starts it get sick. nothing really much I can help you with. you basically hold your game great and prolly had the best verse of the Remix.

yeah man, I liked it Good job

[Nefarious]

My favourite verse was the 1st, i wasnt really digging the chorus, mainly just how it was done not the lyrics, but the rest of the song was worth the listen.

[Devil'sAdvocate]

No Offense to anybody at all and im not trying to be a smart ass or anything.

but why does everybody on this song sound white? and basically all of yall sound like canadians,plus does sentus have a lisp? *shrugs*