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"Different"

Postby Block » Sep 6th, '11, 00:57

Wrote this track nearly 2 years ago and just recorded it quick for a song vs song comp, so I decided to post it up here.


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Re: "Different"

Postby Instant Legend » Sep 6th, '11, 17:58

i like this beat, its unique as hell. i like your flow, and you're bringing some dope real life rhymes to the table. My only complaint is this: I'd like to hear your vocals a bit louder, they get drowned out by the beat at times

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Re: "Different"

Postby Block » Sep 6th, '11, 20:18

Appreciate it man. I'mma hit up the album now.
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Re: "Different"

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 7th, '11, 07:58

The beat is really dope, excelemt production. Too good.

hmm, the mixing is weird, not bad, but weird... like at the beggining it was way too low, and as it advanced it started getting better. I'm interested in knowing exactly what your process is exactly. cuz it sounds clean but I rekon it could better.

the flow and lyrics are ridiculos. very entertaining and the beat is riden really well. the only thing I didn't like at all was that little Bridge where there's like 2 voices at the same time. that was not good man. doesnt fit the vibe and doesn't help on the flow. I strongly suggest you remove that 100%

I prefered the second verse, the story was more clear and the performance more steady.

great song man, you should post the lyrics :y:
but I definitively enjoyed it.

whats up with that beat I sent you a while ago? u used it at all?
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Re: "Different"

Postby Block » Sep 7th, '11, 08:55

Big Ax-D wrote:The beat is really dope, excelemt production. Too good.

hmm, the mixing is weird, not bad, but weird... like at the beggining it was way too low, and as it advanced it started getting better. I'm interested in knowing exactly what your process is exactly. cuz it sounds clean but I rekon it could better.

the flow and lyrics are ridiculos. very entertaining and the beat is riden really well. the only thing I didn't like at all was that little Bridge where there's like 2 voices at the same time. that was not good man. doesnt fit the vibe and doesn't help on the flow. I strongly suggest you remove that 100%

I prefered the second verse, the story was more clear and the performance more steady.

great song man, you should post the lyrics :y:
but I definitively enjoyed it.

whats up with that beat I sent you a while ago? u used it at all?


Thanks man, I appreciate the feedback.

As for the beat: I haven't used it yet because I want to use higher quality equipment before recording to it. It's a song I plan on releasing to the public on an EP or something. I know I said a few weeks ago it would be out within the week, but some stuff got messed up and I wasn't able to get my equipment out of the storage facility (which is 3 hrs from my house) ;/

Again, thanks for the feed bro. And that song will definitely be out in the near future.. I'll PM you when I'm about to release it. You'll be the first to hear it.
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Re: "Different"

Postby Block » Sep 7th, '11, 10:33

After reading your reply alot the volume, I had to listen again... I found out why the first 15 seconds, or so, seem so low... It's because the piano is still playing. It fades out between 30-40 seconds into thr track.

Also, when I mix I usually compress, then eq the bass off / raise the highs, then soften the ess's with a noise filter (x noise), some more eq (mostly for any excess muddy mids or extra room reverb) then another round of compression (different compressor) and finally a mild desser before the mastering program. The process works well, but my equipment is ass at this moment.
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Re: "Different"

Postby Block » Sep 8th, '11, 20:24

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Re: "Different"

Postby Elision » Sep 9th, '11, 09:24

This track and my ipod will be exchanging pleasantries shortly.

It seems like you were off my a syllable or two at the beginning of the 2nd verse, but other than that it was flawless. And I love the hook, it's one of those hooks that you can't quite remember how it goes, so listening to it again and again feeds a craving, you know what i mean? :worship:
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Re: "Different"

Postby Block » Sep 9th, '11, 11:12

Nollie wrote:This track and my ipod will be exchanging pleasantries shortly.

It seems like you were off my a syllable or two at the beginning of the 2nd verse, but other than that it was flawless. And I love the hook, it's one of those hooks that you can't quite remember how it goes, so listening to it again and again feeds a craving, you know what i mean? :worship:

Awesomeness. Glad you like it bro.

And you're right, the vocals on the second verse are about half a beat faster than they should be. This happened during mixing. If too many fx are processed at once, they mess up for some ungodly reason. I just forgot to move them forward. Nice catch.
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Re: "Different"

Postby randomghost » Sep 9th, '11, 23:09

wahhhh nice beat bro :y: produced by whom? unique stuff....verse 1: nice delivery, great flow, lyrics is good...hook: the layover u used wasnt mixed properly couldve been better..verse2: tight ass flow, great delivery...loving verse 2 :y: good song man...1st time i hear from ya...keep them comin man..good stuff :y:
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Re: "Different"

Postby Block » Sep 11th, '11, 20:21

randomghost wrote:wahhhh nice beat bro :y: produced by whom? unique stuff....verse 1: nice delivery, great flow, lyrics is good...hook: the layover u used wasnt mixed properly couldve been better..verse2: tight ass flow, great delivery...loving verse 2 :y: good song man...1st time i hear from ya...keep them comin man..good stuff :y:

Appreciate it, bro. Local producer.
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Re: "Different"

Postby Ticalrecords » Sep 12th, '11, 23:14

it was good, the lyrics were cool and it fit teh beat. it sounds like your really straining yourself when you say your bars, idk maybe thats how you normally sound just thot i'd point it out thts the only thing tht i could find negative. overall real tight

the hook was a little weird having two things overlaying at once idk if its giving the intended effect but w/e.
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Re: "Different"

Postby gutawafang » Sep 25th, '11, 06:44

Pretty good man. :y:
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