Wrote this track nearly 2 years ago and just recorded it quick for a song vs song comp, so I decided to post it up here.
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11016918
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Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
Big Ax-D wrote:The beat is really dope, excelemt production. Too good.
hmm, the mixing is weird, not bad, but weird... like at the beggining it was way too low, and as it advanced it started getting better. I'm interested in knowing exactly what your process is exactly. cuz it sounds clean but I rekon it could better.
the flow and lyrics are ridiculos. very entertaining and the beat is riden really well. the only thing I didn't like at all was that little Bridge where there's like 2 voices at the same time. that was not good man. doesnt fit the vibe and doesn't help on the flow. I strongly suggest you remove that 100%
I prefered the second verse, the story was more clear and the performance more steady.
great song man, you should post the lyrics![]()
but I definitively enjoyed it.
whats up with that beat I sent you a while ago? u used it at all?
Nollie wrote:This track and my ipod will be exchanging pleasantries shortly.
It seems like you were off my a syllable or two at the beginning of the 2nd verse, but other than that it was flawless. And I love the hook, it's one of those hooks that you can't quite remember how it goes, so listening to it again and again feeds a craving, you know what i mean?
randomghost wrote:wahhhh nice beat broproduced by whom? unique stuff....verse 1: nice delivery, great flow, lyrics is good...hook: the layover u used wasnt mixed properly couldve been better..verse2: tight ass flow, great delivery...loving verse 2
good song man...1st time i hear from ya...keep them comin man..good stuff
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