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Vettori & Sincere & Nefarious- Underneath

Postby Vettori » Sep 20th, '11, 21:12

http://hulkshare.com/vvvz3ps8qiqq

did this and the other song last night Let us know what you think

Thanks in advance for your time

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Re: Vettori & Sincere & Nefarious- Underneath

Postby Vettori » Sep 22nd, '11, 20:41

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Re: Vettori & Sincere & Nefarious- Underneath

Postby Eedee » Sep 23rd, '11, 00:58

Flow was great, man. Lyrics were well structured. That's some hot shit there man. I liked the mood of it!

Feed me back soon, the song should be up in a few hours called "Hard Time" with Mat Demaz! Keep an eye out :)
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Re: Vettori & Sincere & Nefarious- Underneath

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 23rd, '11, 04:46

why do you always collab with exactly the same people, its always you three lol. but well, I guess if that connection is good, then its alright. Just sayin you should expand more, by this time it seems very closed down.

The track is beautiful, theres not much I could give feedback, you guys gotta work better on that mixing process, the vocals are too low in comparison to the beat. And also I suggest you vary the stuff a bit, cuz it seems like you always keep the exact same feeling in your songs. I listened to the other songs you posted and yeah. basically same feedback, who ever is down the mix-downs needs to improve on that, and try to spice yourselves more, cuz the songs are really fucking dope, but they are all have the same feeling, the same type of hook, and the same scheming. I'm telling you this cuz I mean, I'd like to hear you guys, specially Sincere doing something more creative, maybe more conceptual you know? Great choices of beats aswell.

keep up the good work :y:
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Re: Vettori & Sincere & Nefarious- Underneath

Postby Tash8 » Sep 23rd, '11, 05:18

crap, had a whole thing written up then it got erased...well anyways i said. Vettori you got some fuckin dope ass rhymin on this. The hook is unique as a muhafucka, I love it! Sincere's verse wasnt his best, flow was choppier than usual but i still like it. and nef, my dude always with the sick fast flow, good shit

overall good song, i'ma download it but i do agree with ax, you got this one style that you're amazing at but you need to expand your boundries.
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Re: Vettori & Sincere & Nefarious- Underneath

Postby Vettori » Sep 23rd, '11, 18:25

I get what you guys are talking about. I don't know what it is i guess i feel more compelled to this style of instrumental/ Emotion, I'm also dealing with some conflict. Understanding what alot of the flaws are in "life". so i feel great pointing it out. I do have fun tracks, but when i do them they really seem to be overbored, so i usually just save them.

glad and thankful your feedback is constructive, if i was to do an album though it would be a variation of things. does help me to remember though :D.

as for networking ill be doing that more after feb. As well differant collaborations
these are the people i live around, my good friends. so there always welcome to get on a track.
we grew up doing this.

& mixing...I was told a previous time my vocals were to loud so i lowered them a tiny bit. i guess my mic just doesnt capture my voice in depth enough. Quality sounds bearable IMO
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Re: Vettori & Sincere & Nefarious- Underneath

Postby gutawafang » Sep 24th, '11, 08:15

never a disappointment when it comes to you three. :y: :y: :y: freaking awesome lyrics and piano beat man. loved it :y: :y: :y: :y: but yeah, the beat seems louder than the voice
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Re: Vettori & Sincere & Nefarious- Underneath

Postby mdemaz » Sep 24th, '11, 09:30

You guys are obviously skilled at production and rapping.
Seriously, there is nothing wrong with this track at all, maybe soft vocals at times..

But it's a solid track really, props.
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