heres my feedback
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=126689&p=1761725#p1761725
and heres this song i wanted to show yall
http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/impossible-is-nothing
Impossible Is Nothing
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Impossible Is Nothing
by Ticalrecords » Sep 20th, '11, 21:32
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Re: Impossible Is Nothing
by Eedee » Sep 23rd, '11, 00:54
The beat is amazing! I really love it. Your delivery was almost sarcastic, kinda like you don't really wanna be recognized in rap. Just more... rawness, I guess? Less sarcasm (I know Slim is sarcastic as fuck, but your delivery is a different kind of sarcasm, like one of those youtube parody rappers who don't really wanna go anywhere in the game, ya know?)
Other than that, your flow was good. Lyrics were nice. Good work, just work on that delivery.
Feed me back soon (song will be up called "Hard Time" with Mat Demaz)! Keep an eye out for it. Should be up in a few hours.
Other than that, your flow was good. Lyrics were nice. Good work, just work on that delivery.
Feed me back soon (song will be up called "Hard Time" with Mat Demaz)! Keep an eye out for it. Should be up in a few hours.
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