Nefarious - Redeem

[Nefarious]

I just pulled an allnighter and wrote this song, then i waited for vettori to come over and we went to his house and recorded, been a while since i wrote and recorded a full song in one day, hope everyone likes it.


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Lyrics

Verse 1

What did i do to deserve, a legacy.
Looking to you to perserve, the memory.
When do we truely return to heaven.
Or get to the ending of learning a lesson.
With less of the mess and my burning aggression.
Im destined to rest for eterinty, stressing.
Is hurting me, early im sure to regret.
And i try to be pure but i worry insted.
Survive in the world or you murder me dead.
Providing the cure that is further ahead.
Desire to do what i heard in my head.
Im tired of you while im turning in bed.
So why am i even believin in them.
In somebody who isnt even my friend.
In someone i never considered a person.
The people who never will see me again.

Why do i wonder if i was one, who can fly.
In the sky, and provide you the thunder.
Id die to be kind, to my mind, but im under.
A magical spell and i try to recover.
Im living a lie, so, give me a sign.
If you could be sad or be sick and be fine.
Im rapping insted i'll singing a line.
Im grabbing a vine, i swing and i climb.
So how did i happen to think of the rhyme.
I had to have had a particular time.
At a picture of mine, you probably stare.
But bitch you can die for all that i care.
Im letting you know that im calling it fair.
So wherever i go you would follow me there.
Your into the water you got to the bottom
And thought youve forgetten to swallow your air.

Chorus

I thought it would all go so beautifully.
You dont even know what i do to be free.
I look in the mirror and who do i see.
Nefarious, what are you doing to me.

Please stop the human im being.
This isnt what i was usually seeing.
So only if you wouldve knew what i seen.
Then i could be true when im due to redeem. x2

Verse 2

Ive come and return, cuz none of you learn.
That it wasnt your turn to be one of the few.
Its easy and plain, for me to explain.
That im bringing the pain and im loving it to.
So somebody give me a second to sit.
Cuz im ripping it sick and becoming a new.
Nefarious you should beware of this.
Put up a barrier running is what you should do.
Im telling you now, you can to get up and leave.
Unless your as fucking pathetic as me.
Im stuck in a prison im nothing but this and.
Im suffering while i pretend to be free.
So all that i seek at the end of the beat.
A secret or promise i said i would keep.
Im ready for any and every beef.
And im one of the many you'll never defeat.

It dont even matter im taking it far.
And slowly it shatters im breaking the bar.
Im growing a habit of making it famous.
You say that im crazy well maybe you are.
For knowing i was, or throwing a fuss.
You drove in a car while i go in the bus.
Coping with nothing and noone to trust.
And i dont even know why its only because.
Your bringing up stuff i dont want to discuss.
There was never a time that i thought of enough.
The beauty is gone, i knew to be calm,
Whatever you think you will do to me's, wrong.
I switch it around, im winning the round.
Im picking you up, and im sitting you down.
Ive risen above and your hittin the ground.
You listen and love it your sick of the sound.

Verse 3

What are you thinking, im up in the blink.
Of an eye, and nothing is getting me high.
Your lettin me die, insted of accepting it.
Guess that the stressing it kept me alive.
Depression aside, i said i would try.
Im feeling a chilling incredible vibe.
Im willing to bet that im deader inside.
Than anyone im in the centre of lies.
Beginning and ending of every line.
Can anyone find, the heavenly shine.
I usually say that im better than fine.
I never rely on my negative mind.
A positive way to be making a change.
I try to be real and your fake in exchange.
Your locking me up and im breaking the cage.
And im awful enough to be taken away.

I start to drop again, im in the dark.
Im not your friend, you want a piece of me.
I'll teach you not to stop until the end.
Or interrupt what i was saying.
So you lucky by the way and.
You should think about your day.
And turn around and walk away.
Unless you want to see the me.
Im keeping secret on the side.
Always hidden underneath.
And barried deep to calm my mind.
It was hard enough for someone.
There to speak to all the time.
Try to treat you as an equal.
If your weak you fall behind.


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[Ticalrecords]

i liked it, your delivery and multi rhymes were on point. only thing i have to say is teh actual content didn't stand out as much as that other song (it took forever), but it was still a cool song. i heard you punch a few times but this is really impressive for writing and recording a song in one day. can't really say anything bad about it cuz there isn't but i wouldn't put it on an album, it sounds more like a mixtape song.
anyways, i got this new song with original production, tryna see what ppl think. check me out

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=128107

[Atone]

Great track, i don't have any respect for you as a person but i got alot of respect for the music you make

good beat, good lyrics, great delivery

[Nefarious]

I think the content was kind of less because of less time put into the song since i wrote this song in one day, and it took me months to write It Took Forever. And its just a cooncidence that it was named that, i have alot of songs i neglect and finish years later lol, and yeah i punched in a couple times, this was damn hard when i recorded, at one point, i said something wrong, and it was so hilarious, vettori had it recorded and kept replaying it, we couldnt stop laughing, i was supposed to say Due to Redeem, but i said something like dooba boo deeee, lol its worse than it sounds tho so that must be bad, also i couldnt remember the lyrics cuz there were almost 100 bars that i had to write down on paper which i just wrote earlier, plus remember how i flowed it all but thats one of my strong points well thanks for listening its always appreciated.

And Atone thankyou very much kind sir, glad you liked it.

[gutawafang]

Motherfucking awesome. That's all.

[mdemaz]

Sick track dude, I liked the layering and beat.

Make sure to keep us up to date with new shit.

[Nefarious]

Thanks everyone, i'll be dropping another song in a few days probably, i should be recording soon.

[Nefarious]

Bump!, I added the lyrics, im surprised this song is as good as it is, its a good listen, i wouldnt want anyone to miss out on this lol.

[Cobo Black]

I liked it...I think it was really good.

For some constructive criticism I think it got a little monotonous though..Same syntax and rhythm structure almost though whole song..including the chorus. There is absolutely talent within it...it just...It didn't offer any highs and lows, you need the lows to make the highs stand out.

You were just above average all the time so it eventually didn't seem significant. I would of liked you to changed up the rhythm at some points to give the listener a break and to make your each verse more individual..it all just seemed the same.

Anyway, thats just my constructive criticism, not bashing...song was really good and you are definitely talented.


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[Nefarious]

Ty

[Ticalrecords]

yea man this shit is dope, that flow of yours is disgusting, major props. first and third ya killed it can't remember why second wasn't as good i think it was the lyrics but still it got nice replay value. btw how many times you gon refer to heaven?

i have a song i wrote n recorded in one day too, viewtopic.php?f=38&t=132843

[Nefarious]

Lol, there are some words i just tend to use alot, i dont believe in god or heaven so i try to say it alot so people will believe the same, believing in god is stupid to me thanks for listening i'll check ur song.