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[Instant Legend]

you've got a pretty good flow goin on this; a few spots i think the transition could have been smoother, but pretty solid for the most part, it just almost feels like you're holding back a bit. I get this sense that theres a lot of energy ready to jump out, but you dont let it completely free

pretty solid, wanna hear ya really cut loose though

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[Ticalrecords]

your rhymes themselves are good but your delivery is killing the replay value of the song. you can't talk about killing someone's soul with such a soft voice haha. i liked what you were doing with the voice going all robo that was cool. the mixing was pretty good i just think your delivery needs work. otherwise you've got a pretty solid song

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[Cobo Black]

I agree with some other people, your lyrics are there, your have talent lyrically but your voice+delivery doesn't match your content though. I'd have to listen to some more songs to pass total judgment but that is the initial feeling.

For some constructive criticism, It kind of sounded like you were reading the lyrics instead of delivering them. I've been at that stage before, you really need to think about what your saying, and say that shit as if you were saying it all while ridding the beat.

I think this will continue to get better the more you make songs and the more you get comfortable on the mic. Keep up the good work man, talent is there for sure!

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