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Mat Demaz- Born Dead (Freestyle 9)

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Mat Demaz- Born Dead (Freestyle 9)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 12th, '11, 10:11

Getting sick of the hate..
So I conformed and started spitting like I did back in the day.
Imo, this flow suits me better.


Lyrics:

Yo
welcome to the 16 bars EP

born dead in a fucking rad cask under grass
doctor pulled me up dad slapped mah ass
bitches on my dick because I spit soo ill
skinning motherfuckers like buffalo bill
flow is a tsunami soaking dirt mate
you're washed up man getting hit by my earthquake
I'm a god damn walking natural disaster
while you're arm gets wrapped up in plaster
I'm too hot I kick that fast rhymes shit
double-time snare and phat hi-hat hit
hoes on my dick because I spit
don't fuck with me or you'll die quick
I don't love you so start to cry bitch
sticking 9 nails into your eyelids
don't blink bitch and you might live
fuck it rip off ya skin and steal 5 ribs

LOF:
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Re: Mat Demaz- Born Dead (Freestyle 9)

Postby Eedee » Oct 13th, '11, 00:32

You had pretty good flow and rhyming on this one!! Niiiiice. The nine inch nails part you stole from Em xD (or a homage, either way, niiiiice).

Vocal mastering seemed a bit off. Needs to be more.. plush, I guess? haha. sounds kinda dry and makes my mouth taste weird just listening to it.

Feed me back please man? Thanks! viewtopic.php?f=38&t=131264
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Re: Mat Demaz- Born Dead (Freestyle 9)

Postby mdemaz » Oct 13th, '11, 08:07

Everyone was saying my vocals were compressed badly in a few tracks, so I stopped using it altogether...Now I'm gonna start using it again..
I got a setting that does it just as much that it doesn't cause distortion..I mainly wanted to rap on simple beats though, so I didn't bother for a simple beat like that, as you could hear me clearly with the unmodified vocals..

I'll feed now..

This is just a slow version of my flow, I'm trying something similar to 2002 Eminem also.
1999 Em or prime Tech N9ne is really hard to flow on beats with.
I tried that on Psychotic.
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Re: Mat Demaz- Born Dead (Freestyle 9)

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 13th, '11, 17:42

i think it the lyrics were pretty good man, left me hangin a lil it felt like u have more to add. anyways, obvious the quality wasn't high, but i like it just for being raw (exclusive) now if only u can add images into our heads and molest us with machettes or sumn
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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