AhdduB - How I Feel

[Ticalrecords]

proof of feedback: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=130888

aite so i spent about a half hour tryna mix this shit, tell me what yall think


http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/how-i-feel

[Cobo Black]

Ima be honest, the lyrics were good...but the delivery sounded like u either wrote it to a different beat or wrote to no beat....and then just tried to make it fit. And honestly...in a lot of parts...it didn't fit. You need to add some word in some parts to stretch it out some...aslo...it was all really low in my headphones. Your on right track, can be dope if u fix delivery.

[Solace]

You've actually gotten so much better at writing. You were on beat pretty much. I liked your delivery, you sound very sarcastic and like you're enjoying recording. That's what it's all about. This is probably the best I've heard from you, so definite improvement. Good beat choice, I love sampled singing. Now work on some light overlays or something!

[Ticalrecords]

bump, come on yall


btw thanks solace n cobo black, i love the conflicting critiques, but its all good they still constructive... i literally need one more opinion to make the decision to rerecord or not...soooo bring it on

[Nefarious]

I liked the lyrics and ur delivery was as good as the last i heard, i didnt like this beat as much as the last one tho, it was just to loud and overpowering, i wouldve prefered it a bit quieter on the verses lol you still managed to make it sound right, chorus spot was pretty nice aswell, this one changed how i feel about you, lol get it

[Eedee]

Sorry about the delay!

Vocals still sound a little low on the volume. Better writing and delivery. Loved the sample! Beat was pretty awesome as well.

The multi's were pretty awesome

[Tranquil]

Man, this was a good track, your delivery was good and the lyrics were pretty good aswell! Your vocals sounded a little low to me, but that didn't take away any value from the track. Also loved the sample and the beat, I'll defiantly be checking your new songs whenever you drop 'em

[Ticalrecords]

thanks everyone, i greatly appreciate the feedback