Nefarious - I Won't Die

[Nefarious]

One of my darker songs i guess. Lol

http://hulkshare.com/71e4oqk6rcwd


I put the wrong lyrics up, lol.

Link to feed: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=123542&start=30

[Ticalrecords]

i wasn't feeling the lyrics till the third verse - you killed that shit. the beat was sick - i think i have heard it before on soundclick too. over all mixing was good. dn't really know what to say except it was a good song w a great chorus. thats prolly best way to describe it. your hook writing is on point tho, foreal. i have listened to a few of your stuff, and i notice your not into punch lines or shit like that. do you got a song where you don't just flow cocky? haha



i got a few songs up that no one has really given feedback on, help a homie out

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=132271

[Tranquil]

This shit is good man! Theres nothing wrong with this, just the volume on the verses sounded a little low to me, other than that this shit is fire!

I wish I could find beats like that

[Nefarious]

Thanks both of you, i notice the volume of my verses is usually low but i just let vettori do w/e he thinks sounds right, it might be, because he sometimes listens to it in headphones or isnt wearing headphones one or the other, and im not sure if i have any songs where im not cocky... if anything i would be sad in alot of my other songs.

[iain08]

This is sick as fuck. Your flow/lyrics are great, and it actually sounds like something I would listen to more than once.

[Nefarious]

Thankyou very much friend

[Phantom]

i like this. nice flow and lyrics. quality isnt great but not a big deal at all. good work

[Trimss]

Man you're one of the dopest on this board. I like this track a lot, even though I feel like the volume on your verses were too low. The hook was class, seriously. So was the beat and your delivery.

Keep making dark tracks, I really liked this.

[gutawafang]

awesome man.

[mdemaz]

Beat is ridiculous, same could be said with your flow and lyrical skills.
It's flawless.
I agree with the vocal mix, sometimes you need to play around with the dynamics of them, so they sound warmer without losing the rawness of the range.
But the more headroom you have, the better when it comes to that.

[Joel Venom]

3rd verse was the best verse honestly my man. the song was good overall tho but i felt the alst was the strongest. keep it up much respect.

[Nefarious]

Thanks everyone

[Midnight EyeZ]

Yo Nefarious man you're in an ill rapper...I'm always sceptical about listening to rapper's tracks' on online forums coz in all honesty I expect them to be rapping like Lil' Wayne and Wiz Khalifa and everyone else I despise for ruining Hip-Hop, but you're ill man...Checked out quite a few of your tracks on your HulkShare account...

Good work man, one of the best I've heard on here...

[Nefarious]

thats damn good feed thur

[Scrubz]

Your work lyrically was pretty good. Nice flow and a pretty nice delivery but the production is lacking. I suggest you get some one who is good at it to do it or maybe find another program. Sounds mellow and drowned out. All in all it was a nice song man, good as usual!