AhdduB - Bang Along Remix

[Ticalrecords]

yo wrote and recorded this real quick today, tell me what yall think

Proof of feedback: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=132163

http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/bang-along-remix

[Cobo Black]

Man, you got a good sound, good content, its good lyrics...you just gotta ride the beat bro. Your all over the place. Too fast sometimes, too slow sometimes and other times right on beat..and THATS when its good. It makes it sound like you wrote song to different beat then forced it here. YOUR ALMOST THERE!!! lol, keep up the good work man.

Work on riding the beat man...would you mind posting your lyrics here..I want to see them.

[Ticalrecords]

hey thanks man, here are the lyrics


Bang Along

I don’t know this time it’s a little more subdued, if you will, just seen and heard a lot of shit that I don’t like…so I say fuck it

I ask why the hatred – what have I created,
Oh my god – I’m a motherfucking nihilist taking
The concept of nothing to the very next level
Feel like I could bend metal – resurrect dead devils,
Fuck it- Throw my hands to the sky and pray
Like please god – don’t let me die today,
Melodramatic? – yeah till the fellow comes back with,
A gun – yeah you think I got a pistol to match him?/
That ginsue I laugh – wouldn’t get you like that
Fuck friends - I got nothing but wind to my back
This rap game – was cool till holding gats made,
The only bling needed was a dog tag with ya last name
Shit yall are the soldiers – I’m just a civilian,
I got nothing to lose – unlike the gazillion
Others out there who got their life in this hip hop
Makes me say fuck it just enjoy the shine from the wristwatch/






I could care less who you compare me to
Just don’t come back later and swear we cool,
Cuz we not – nah man we not
So don’t get it twisted – when you listen to this shit, get this



Wall street don’t scare me – clearly –
we missing something here we –
should clear up – tear up – I rap about weird stuff?
Its not normal? Ya According to yalls morals, fair nuff,
but see – I’m telling ya if ya actually hear what,
I’m saying you know you’d share what – I said with someone else
and theres what – leads me to believe that theres a fucking hell,
In the booth- I swear to god I just play as Iago -
yea blunt and gun smoke – my favorite combo,
I’m a one man show for a one woman audience
A earpiece each –and two of the cutest bopping heads
Mine falls out – fuck it I’m just tryna stay on beat
Off beat personality keeps me from going off key
Nah mean? I wanna get a fan errytime I cross streets,
Yaknow in LA – cuz at that point itll be all beef,
Ya heard?

[Solace]

Ah the mixing was much more apparent here, nice reverb. Well written. You sound great. As Cobo Black was saying, work on your flow. That's all you really need now. If you ever feel like you need to speed up the pace of your rapping, your line is too long, and if you need to slow down the pace, your line is too short. Work on that aspect of writing. Make sure everything is at the same pace. Keep at it.

[Nefarious]

This is what i like about you lol, im glad you showed me this, from the very beginning i could tell the beat suited your style and voice, and once i heard the lines,
Fuck it- Throw my hands to the sky and pray
Like please god – don’t let me die today,
It gave me that big impactfull feeling where you just stop and say, ooooooh lol.
You did it perfect there, your verses are always sick, im now expecting to hear something good everytime i play one of your songs, the only thing that sounded weird was the last line of the chorus, but the chorus itself sounded like it was made to be there even tho i got a kinda different feeling from it, different is always good, just takes getting used to for me, and listening to it more.
8.9/10