Grim:) Shady 2.0 Cypher

[Willy]

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=133492&p=1802811#p1802811

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=pl ... qPSd_IhNsc

Hey guys, this is my first rap track, but I need some honest feedback and know you guys will deliver with flying colors :P Let me know the areas I can improve, whats good, etc.

Also, I'm the guy with the first verse.

Thanks a lot guys,

-grim:)

[TripleNineThree]

First time rapping? Wow.

Lyrics were actually really good - 8/10
Quality was amazing, you do this in a studio? - 9/10
Delivery was good as well, you could put a little more emotion into it I suppose - 8/10
Flow was good. It was steady all of your verse - 9/10

Overall this was a good little verse, I give it an 8.5/10 - I can't believe this is your first time rapping. Keep it up fam!

[Willy]

Thanks a lot man!

Will definitely keep at it, every track i drop from here on out will be better and better. Thanks for the kind words.

edit- No I did this actually in a closet and just put blankets and pillows up everywhere. I'm using a Yeti mic, the 100 or so dollar one.


-grim:)

[Words]

This was amazing, you really have a lot of confidence on the mic considering you just started, that's big. Your delivery was strong and confident, you flowed excellently to the beat. I really can't find anything wrong with this. Good Job
Also, egg cartons work well if you line the walls with those. They are a good alternative to expensive foam. So if you're looking to switch from something else other than blankets and pillows that's what i would suggest.