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Redzek & Kez - Thinking Of Myself [NEW]

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 27th, '11, 20:41

Okay , So This Is a dark song we did .. i hope you like it :smoking:

Here: http://hulkshare.com/up1519zmqe61

feedback link:http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=134024

Lyrics ;

(Chorus)

All the years of living alone
Thinking of myself
Were filled with days of emptiness
And room for no one else
I found a haven in isolation
With nothing to lose
Safe and lonely thinking of only
What I had to prove

(verse 1: Redzek)

and what i had to prove is that i aint sad as you
might think..always on my own but is it bad to do
my thing! for me is who i sing and to the truth im linked
and the proof is inked,on every damn paper
i cant stand haters,they' ll understand later
when they see that im the man,takin elevator
cuz i dont take steps,so let me state facts
nobody does it better but man i hate that
im sittin all alone on my own with no phone
im spittin so cold,at home im just gone gold
but nobody notice me,cuz i aint known though
i got nothin on my mind,my mind is on nothin
and i aint bluffin,im tough when its rough and
im sufferin cuz of this pain that im stuck in
im strugglin,insane..im so phat but oh thin
im swimmin on my ocean i wont leave it open

(Chorus)

All the years of living alone
Thinking of myself
Were filled with days of emptiness
And room for no one else
I found a haven in isolation
With nothing to lose
Safe and lonely thinking of only
What I had to prove

(verse 2: Kez)

The selfishness has turned my life into this Hellish pit
A thousand songs i've wrote just with the intention to tell you this
I fell a bit, but I climbed the cliff I jumped off
And I'll be here until the end, until you all have fucked off
Just stop, just rot, there's no empathy
Inside my mind, cause I, was simply left to bleed
And when my blood left my veins, they screamed a deadly scream
Then my rage, let me change, to something I should never be
I'm thinking of myself, that's all I've got room for
I know it's wrong and I really ought to do more
But how can you expect that I would care for anyone less than I
When I have been let down by every single fucking friend of mine?
My heart beats, beats my enemies to bloody pulps
Laughing at the world, spit on it, yeah, fuck you all
I live a death sentence, I won't let you become the cause
Cause I have always promised myself that I wouldn't fall!

(Chorus)

All the years of living alone
Thinking of myself
Were filled with days of emptiness
And room for no one else
I found a haven in isolation
With nothing to lose
Safe and lonely thinking of only
What I had to prove

(verse 3 : Redzek )

i got nothin to lose but i got somethin to prove
i wanna talk to myself but im not in the mood
all these years i been livin alone,isolated
a lil doubtful,couldv died from the hatred
i did cry,i was underestimated
i hate it,when my life is debated
i little bit complicated i guess
i never said it,but you cant feel my stress
i dont want anyone to talk about me
why'd you even care if you motherfuckers doubt me?
thats why im outtie,like they cant live without me
i got no room for no one else,
im beggin please someone help!
how i felt with what i dealt,was cold so now i melt
"yo hes kiddin",no i aint, you dunno my pain
i dun show my mayne ,you dont wanna know how i get cold again
and again and again i pretend that i have friends but i dont,imm go insane
this game is lame and it stays the same

(Chorus)

All the years of living alone
Thinking of myself
Were filled with days of emptiness
And room for no one else
I found a haven in isolation
With nothing to lose
Safe and lonely thinking of only
What I had to prove

(verse 4 : Kez)

What's the point when life is just a bunch of noise
I'll let life guide me motherfucker I am done with choice
I am not something that God would anoint
But that's fine by me, I don't need a life that's fucked with joy
And it find it so dastardly all the things you ask of me
What have you done for me except fucking laugh at me?
There's no refunds, you bought this now you're stuck with it
Fuck this shit, life is expensive, here's the cost of it
It's counterfeit, you were scammed, you must feel dumb
Cause when you find yourself all alone, don't think that we'll come
We only think of ourselves, cause when the wheel's done
Turning, and life ends, we'll reunite with real scum
And I am tired of trying, and I am tired of lying
So why deny it, this is me, don't even try to like it
You aren't worth a single thought from my cranium
Thinking of myself, with a heart of titanium


(Chorus)

All the years of living alone
Thinking of myself
Were filled with days of emptiness
And room for no one else
I found a haven in isolation
With nothing to lose
Safe and lonely thinking of only
What I had to prove
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Re: Redzek & Kez - Thinking Of Myself [NEW]

Postby B.A.D. » Nov 28th, '11, 01:35

why do you Rush yourself to put out many tracks at the same time, give people time to listen and enjoy the other one n shit. plus all this tracks of yours should be kept for album material, they're pretti fucking good. anyways

what a fucking great song man, its brilliant, and you keep elevating your writing skills, specially on your second verse, that was brutal, excellent writing. Your flow and all is good, the only thing you are missing is good quality, and you need to probably concentrate on speaking clearer.

Kez was awsome as always, it feels nice to hear new material from him :worship: from kez, I liked his first verse more, I thought that had a lot of passion, but all 4 verses are incredible, great great Job both of you :worship: :worship:

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Re: Redzek & Kez - Thinking Of Myself [NEW]

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 28th, '11, 03:08

Big Ax-D wrote:why do you Rush yourself to put out many tracks at the same time, give people time to listen and enjoy the other one n shit. plus all this tracks of yours should be kept for album material, they're pretti fucking good. anyways

what a fucking great song man, its brilliant, and you keep elevating your writing skills, specially on your second verse, that was brutal, excellent writing. Your flow and all is good, the only thing you are missing is good quality, and you need to probably concentrate on speaking clearer.

Kez was awsome as always, it feels nice to hear new material from him :worship: from kez, I liked his first verse more, I thought that had a lot of passion, but all 4 verses are incredible, great great Job both of you :worship: :worship:

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yeah true, i should give it a break and release an album or somethin..better than releasin track by track to see people's feedback...anyways thanks for the feedback man im glad you qualify it as brilliant :worship: and yeah man i keep elevating my writing skills from track to track so yeah my second verse too =p so anyways man this is my first collab with kez and see what it brings it :smoking: still waitin for u to check the track i sent u on facebook inbox though :coffee:
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Re: Redzek & Kez - Thinking Of Myself [NEW]

Postby l33chie » Nov 28th, '11, 05:43

WOW! This is beyond the words of dope, I liked this a lot, the quality was great, I wish my quality was like that. I have nothing but good things to say about this :y: Keep it up.
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Re: Redzek & Kez - Thinking Of Myself [NEW]

Postby Trimss » Nov 28th, '11, 13:46

Great track. :y:

Both were dope, I liked your second verse more Redzek and I liked Kez's first verse more. Great beat, also.

Le Tunisien wrote:all these years i been livin alone,isolated
a lil doubtful,couldv died from the hatred
i did cry,i was underestimated


for some reasons, I expected to read "underrated" lmao.

Dope song guys. It's good that you're back; it brings some activity. But don't forget to give a feedback even if you're not posting a song or something, so the section is even more active. :y:
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Re: Redzek & Kez - Thinking Of Myself [NEW]

Postby gvdz » Nov 28th, '11, 13:57

redkez :shifty:
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Re: Redzek & Kez - Thinking Of Myself [NEW]

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 28th, '11, 15:42

Trimss wrote:Great track. :y:

Both were dope, I liked your second verse more Redzek and I liked Kez's first verse more. Great beat, also.

Le Tunisien wrote:all these years i been livin alone,isolated
a lil doubtful,couldv died from the hatred
i did cry,i was underestimated


for some reasons, I expected to read "underrated" lmao.

Dope song guys. It's good that you're back; it brings some activity. But don't forget to give a feedback even if you're not posting a song or something, so the section is even more active. :y:

Thanks man, your feedback is appreciated, and yeah i should have though about underrated it would have went well with it...but oh well thanks for feeding and yeah its more active obviously and of course i will feed other tracks, keep tr artists alive :b:

@gvdz: now thats subliminal aint it :shifty:
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Re: Redzek & Kez - Thinking Of Myself [NEW]

Postby Scrubz » Nov 28th, '11, 19:32

Just a dope track. Well written, and a nice flow. If im gonna nit pick, all I can say is your accent, but that ain't fair. Keep at it man, both of you guys are talented. nothin else much to say! Check out my tease of my up coming project and drop some feed!
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Re: Redzek & Kez - Thinking Of Myself [NEW]

Postby Le Tunisien » Dec 2nd, '11, 18:44

Scrubz wrote:Just a dope track. Well written, and a nice flow. If im gonna nit pick, all I can say is your accent, but that ain't fair. Keep at it man, both of you guys are talented. nothin else much to say! Check out my tease of my up coming project and drop some feed!

thanks for the feed man, ill check yours when i can :b: :b:
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Re: Redzek & Kez - Thinking Of Myself [NEW]

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 7th, '11, 11:16

I have been listening to this a lot, top of the ipod playlist :y:
great collab... B to the mafucking UMP :worship:
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Re: Redzek & Kez - Thinking Of Myself [NEW]

Postby Le Tunisien » Dec 7th, '11, 18:08

Big Ax-D wrote:I have been listening to this a lot, top of the ipod playlist :y:
great collab... B to the mafucking UMP :worship:

Woooooo, how awesome ..ax! :flutter: :b: :b: our new collab will be even better hopefully :shifty:
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Re: Redzek & Kez - Thinking Of Myself [NEW]

Postby Solace » Dec 10th, '11, 18:44

I love beats with the sampled high pitched choruses haha...The beat is dope. I actually really enjoyed both of your verses a good amount. I like the length of this, rarely do I see artists on this site do 4 verse songs ('cept SaJJad just dropped one). Although Kez seemed to be more consistent with his rhymes and flow, Redzek had a creative flow aroudn here (although you could have pulled it off much smoother/cleaner)

"yo hes kiddin",no i aint, you dunno my pain
i dun show my mayne ,you dont wanna know how i get cold again
and again and again i pretend that i have friends but i dont,imm go insane
this game is lame and it stays the same


Both of you have got to get better mics lol, your songs could sound so much better. But yeah, keep at it; you're doing good Redzek and Kez you've always been on the right path.
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Re: Redzek & Kez - Thinking Of Myself [NEW]

Postby Le Tunisien » Dec 11th, '11, 17:01

Solace wrote:I love beats with the sampled high pitched choruses haha...The beat is dope. I actually really enjoyed both of your verses a good amount. I like the length of this, rarely do I see artists on this site do 4 verse songs ('cept SaJJad just dropped one). Although Kez seemed to be more consistent with his rhymes and flow, Redzek had a creative flow aroudn here (although you could have pulled it off much smoother/cleaner)

"yo hes kiddin",no i aint, you dunno my pain
i dun show my mayne ,you dont wanna know how i get cold again
and again and again i pretend that i have friends but i dont,imm go insane
this game is lame and it stays the same


Both of you have got to get better mics lol, your songs could sound so much better. But yeah, keep at it; you're doing good Redzek and Kez you've always been on the right path.

yeah man i got a lot of em these sampled beats,and yeah man i thought it would be dope to do a 4 verses song and thanks to kez he did the 2 verses as well :y: and yeah that part had a creative flow cuz i just want it to pace it a little bit quicker :flutter: thanks solace
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