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SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby Xray » Dec 8th, '11, 06:30

Yo what's good, it's been a while haha. I recorded this in June this year, but I didn't have the chance to upload it so here it is now. Much more songs coming, this is only a sample of the shit you'll be hearing on this album. I'm beyond half way through the album, so it's almost there. Sorry I couldn't leave feedback for much, but I'm def back in this bitch, so I'll get to it. Oh and one more thing you should know, I recorded this while injured as fuck, my face was two faced pretty much, bad accident, so hence the title.

Artist: SaJJad The Heist
Title: Animal
Produced By: -Unknown-
Album: 2011 Demo
Mixed By: SaJJad

    [Verse One]
    I gotta die right here and make my mark
    Before everybody takes my favourite part
    Soul of the ozone layer, player
    You dont wanna die and stay up in the air
    Tongue of the beast, gobbled all the beats
    Spit so fast like I swallowed all your feet
    Accompany defeat when I'm coming to be
    And I'm gunning to eat, I'm a barrel competing
    when I come near, take a stump here
    Rumbling with death cause I'm from here
    Ain't struggling unless it's unfair
    Ain't stopping, I'm replacing brave hearts
    With a game of cards I'll engrave your path
    And break you halves of all your carves
    Place you on a clock and shake the past
    So when time ticks you will pay the cost
    Cause your running in circles like a theme park
    And I'm coming to hurt you like E.R
    Cut your limbs into fins so you'll breath hard
    Don't cross your fingers in these parts
    I don't write with my hand I only write with yours
    I don't tribe with a clan homie I'll tie your boss
    Put him in a knot and cut his angered fate
    Hang his face on my daggers blade
    Hook em so right till I anchored their graves
    Look em in the eye and spill anthems of dates
    I can breath all the gold where the goners live
    Feel the breeze of the cold in this haunted ship
    You can see what I hold in this cornered grid
    But the sea's must evolved into water-cliffs
    So touched that I had to wave goodbye
    Get it? wave goodbye, wave goodbye

    [Hook]
    I'm a motherfucking animal, animal, I'm an animal
    I'm a motherfucking animal, animal, I'm an animal
    I'm a motherfucking animal, animal, I'm an animal
    I'm a motherfucking animal, put me in a cage

    I'm a motherfucking animal, animal, I'm an animal
    I'm a motherfucking animal, animal, I'm an animal
    I'm a motherfucking animal, animal, Yo
    Put me in a cage and lock me away, I'm a motherfucking animal

    [Verse Two]
    Many wanna write life when it go gets
    Many wanna light fire from the darkness
    Many wanna pull your tongue with these pliers
    Many wanna put you under these tires
    Many wanna cut your lungs so it's quiet
    I'm not a bias, I just go by it
    Not a round of clue but you can look to eye it
    Eat a fat bitch and tell the cops I'm on a diet
    Find you where you're living and start blood
    Keys in ignition and my car's stuck
    Catch ya when your looking and your heart stops
    Shatter all your windows with a spark plug
    Cater all your bones to my pet dog
    Navigate your crome when it get's dug
    Suffocate your dome with a tooth brush
    When it's too cut, wanna move bruh? huh?
    Bleed till youre pale and leave a trail
    For investigators to lead and fail
    Strap a device to your voicebox
    And when the coins tossed you'll get your head shot
    It's common taste when the chocolate breaks
    I got you rocking shades like the cotton days
    And your coffin pays what the goblin takes
    I got you guzzling your age, turn to god for grace
    When I displace your modern for forgotten days
    Straight off the case cartridges
    Shooting at car bridges with the temperatures
    of the shells leveraging it's cold oxygen
    Chill and murdering, and I'm covered in blood
    I promise you're gone-ish so come and get fucked
    Cause you'll tarnish when I put this guts in this cup
    So come and get it motherfucker

    [Hook]
    I'm a motherfucking animal, animal, I'm an animal
    I'm a motherfucking animal, animal, I'm an animal
    I'm a motherfucking animal, animal, I'm an animal
    I'm a motherfucking animal, put me in a cage

    I'm a motherfucking animal, animal, I'm an animal
    I'm a motherfucking animal, animal, I'm an animal
    I'm a motherfucking animal, animal, Yo
    Put me in a cage and lock me away, I'm a motherfucking animal

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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby mdemaz » Dec 8th, '11, 07:31

Seriously, you killed this shit.

Perfect vocal tone and range.
This song sounded like it was crafted with precision and perfection in mind.
Paying close attention to this track, I still see some very vague flaws in the way you presented the vocals.

Obviously, the quality is great, but in some small amounts I feel like..
The delivery shifts below the caliber that the song maintains throughout..
Nevermind that though, it's really irrelevant because the performance overall was great.
It just makes it sound more human instead of robotic with the flaws.

At the moment, I can say that you are making my country proud, your style and flow is on another level compared to those posers that just do the same shit.
You never sold your soul by conforming to mainstream styles and flows but you still managed to chop and rap like you usually do without it sounding generic.

That alone is not an easy feat and is definitely one thing I like about you.

You may need to take this beat to the hospital because it sustained severe injuries.
You seem to enjoy making music too so that's a really good thing.

Iight..This is my detailed post for the month.
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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby Trimss » Dec 8th, '11, 16:39

*name* wrote:Vintage Sajjad, the beat's dead. You got a unique style of switching a rhyme scheme bruh, really original shit. Awesome. :worship:


This.

Amazing track really.. A great beat, a simple hook, passion in the delivery and great rhymes..

I really have nothing to say against this track, I think it's just perfect.
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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby Solace » Dec 8th, '11, 22:18

Dope track, love the chorus :y:
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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby Sam. » Dec 8th, '11, 22:40

Your Flow is mothafucking insane and the way you switch the Rhyme Scheme is sheer dope-ness. I love this Track. Thanks for dropping it, it was a refreshing to hear you once again.
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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 9th, '11, 03:27

shit, i dunno, i see the passion, but i just wasn't getting it, the pattern style and the rhymes u used i just couldn't enjoy it, didn't seem to be real thought provoking, more like thrown together rhymes to me... sorry
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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 9th, '11, 06:44

fuck me man, this was magnificent and I was surprised in many aspects, first of all, the beat choice, I could never have pictured you on this type of beat, and you managed to fucking murder it... then the writing, and fast flowing, anther new thing, actually, the entire scheme and everything is something new and it sounds fucking A man. I can tell you put a lot of effort in the syllable counting and the structuring cuz thats not an easy flow to pull off, so that is beast man.

the mixing is great aswell... the hook volume a bit too low, but I actually liked the repetition man.
the only negative things might be some of the pronunciations, some are really weird, but lmao, other than that all I can say is that I was mesmerized, great fucking Job :y:

loved it :y:
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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby Kez » Dec 9th, '11, 07:13

First of all, I am glad to see you return, you always been one of my TR favourites.

The beat is dope as fuck, did you produce it?

Your delivery if anything has just got even better. You always had my favourite delivery on TR, just so powerful. Your flow is awesome too, when I read the lyrics first I thought it might not flow too well, but you made it work great. The lyrics are vintage Sajjad, you don't make it too complex all the time but still manage to get the multis in. And your violent imagery has been sorely missed.

The hook was alright, it had a nice rhythm to it but the repetition wasn't too inventive. That's the only kind of complaint I can lever against this.

I muchly enjoyed this. Glad to see you back. I await the tape.
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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby Xray » Dec 9th, '11, 10:38

Thanks for all the feed guys, much appreciated. :worship:

New song coming in a few. :smoking:
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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby Xray » Dec 11th, '11, 06:23

Bump.
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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby Le Tunisien » Dec 11th, '11, 16:34

yoo, you seriously killed man, tight fuckin verses...but man it would have beeen 1000x better if u did some sort of melodic chorus like u can...i expected a better hook but oh well the song is dope lyrics and flow,delivery wise man :worship:
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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby Xray » Dec 14th, '11, 12:15

Props for the feed bro. :b:
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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby gutawafang » Dec 17th, '11, 07:29

you're crazy. :y:
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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 17th, '11, 12:13

still bumpin this bitch :worship: :worship:
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Re: SaJJad The Heist - Animal

Postby Scrubz » Dec 19th, '11, 20:22

Good to hear you again bro! :y: Hit me up if you ever wanna do something.
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