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Solace - Stand Tall

Postby Solace » Dec 10th, '11, 18:35

Swag :b: Mixing on the verses is a bit different than I usually do, but I like how it was used.

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[Chorus]
With every single fibre in me I am going to stand tall,
Never will you witness me entering a grand fall,
I will stay up, listen, have you heard of me?
If you haven't, please listen to the words I speak.

[Verse 1]
I been trying to find the reason I was designed,
With the mic and a mindset that will fight every time,
As I recite any line, I excite with a rhyme,
That'll wake up every sense you have and light up your spine,
I am right, it's my time, to deliver a force,
That will enter a course and give a sight to the blind
I will climb to the top as I'm beating the hate,
With many lines that I jot just to keep me awake,
Easily break but lately I been seeming to take,
Every demon I face into the deepest of fates,
Me on a stage, reflecting energy,
Throw it right back and neglect my enemies,
This is for you, the guy listening through speakers,
Waiting for the next Nas to hit us up with ether,
And these words...I am sending them in pain,
So maybe you will get it when it enters in your brain.

[Chorus] x2
With every single fibre in me I am going to stand tall,
Never will you witness me entering a grand fall,
I will stay up, listen, have you heard of me?
If you haven't, please listen to the words I speak.

[Verse 2]
I hear not a sound when I drop this round,
Of lyrics that were written by the lost and found,
I am honest now, and I will top the crowd,
Leave my solitude, and walk the ground,
I am free and I return with a track this clever,
I am back, and it's fact that my act's together,
And this'll last forever, you're tired but I know,
That you will win through every single fibre that I hold,
There's a fire in my soul, to my family and friends,
Support is what is pushing me to rap until the end,
So I thank you, through rap I was tracking every memory,
You gave me the ability to stand against my enemies,
But that isn't the end you see, I'm havoc, a brawl,
I been living in this world with my back to a wall,
No one understands when I say that isn't all,
'Cause some will manage to fall where I've been standing so tall.

[Chorus] x2
With every single fibre in me I am going to stand tall,
Never will you witness me entering a grand fall,
I will stay up, listen, have you heard of me?
If you haven't, please listen to the words I speak.
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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby Willy » Dec 10th, '11, 20:00

Pretty sick man. The chorus is pretty catchy, verses are tight, you obviously know what you're doing. Only thing I would say is maybe add a little more animation to your voice, especially when appropriate....like.. "There's a fire in my soul!" Other than that small observation, you are killin' it playa. :b:
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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby Eedee » Dec 10th, '11, 22:10

Your delivery really sat well on the beat, reminded me of Relapse (the way his voice just seems to be FOR that beat, ya know?) Nice multis, as always. You sort of changed up your flow, less pauses and more continuation on the bars - good to hear! :)

I enjoyed this dude. Keep droppin'!
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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby Xray » Dec 11th, '11, 06:05

You're getting much better bro. Your delivery really shined on this beat. I thought the chorus wasn't that great, I mean it works, but I don't know, not feeling it that much. Your lyrics were cool some good lines I liked "But that isn't the end you see, I'm havoc, a brawl/I been living in this world with my back to a wall". Keep it up man, this was a good track. :b:
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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby Solace » Dec 11th, '11, 07:16

WilyMo021 wrote:Pretty sick man. The chorus is pretty catchy, verses are tight, you obviously know what you're doing. Only thing I would say is maybe add a little more animation to your voice, especially when appropriate....like.. "There's a fire in my soul!" Other than that small observation, you are killin' it playa. :b:

Thanks Grim. Yeah, I figure you're right about my delivery in certain areas; thanks.

Eedee wrote:Your delivery really sat well on the beat, reminded me of Relapse (the way his voice just seems to be FOR that beat, ya know?) Nice multis, as always. You sort of changed up your flow, less pauses and more continuation on the bars - good to hear! :)

I enjoyed this dude. Keep droppin'!

Thanks Eedee, glad you liked it. :y:

Xray wrote:You're getting much better bro. Your delivery really shined on this beat. I thought the chorus wasn't that great, I mean it works, but I don't know, not feeling it that much. Your lyrics were cool some good lines I liked "But that isn't the end you see, I'm havoc, a brawl/I been living in this world with my back to a wall". Keep it up man, this was a good track. :b:

To each his/her own, about the chorus. Thanks for listening X; glad to be showing improvement since

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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 12th, '11, 11:46

I continue to be amazed by your quality, very very clean. I wanna try your mixing style, mind sharing, I wanna sound how I sound on that.

this song, hmmm... probably one of your best so far man, gotta say this is dope. The hook is crazy, I like the melody a lot, its catchy and not exagerated. perfect. maybe could add a little extra layover with a low based effect or sometin, but yeah, highlight of the song for me.

the beat choice is aite, cool beat.

but yeah man, you've been improving a lot, keep the great work :y:
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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby Nefarious » Dec 12th, '11, 19:55

My favourite part was the second verse, this song held together pretty well the whole way through.
I have nothing bad to say about it.
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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby Solace » Dec 13th, '11, 01:11

Big Ax-D wrote:I continue to be amazed by your quality, very very clean. I wanna try your mixing style, mind sharing, I wanna sound how I sound on that.

Want me to PM you how I mix it? Haha I'm glad you think it sounds good, I try to do the best with my shitty mic.

Big Ax-D wrote:this song, hmmm... probably one of your best so far man, gotta say this is dope. The hook is crazy, I like the melody a lot, its catchy and not exagerated. perfect. maybe could add a little extra layover with a low based effect or sometin, but yeah, highlight of the song for me.

Thanks; I'll keep that in mind.

Big Ax-D wrote:the beat choice is aite, cool beat.

but yeah man, you've been improving a lot, keep the great work :y:

I sure hope so.

Nefarious wrote:My favourite part was the second verse, this song held together pretty well the whole way through.
I have nothing bad to say about it.

Thanks Nef, glad you enjoyed it :y:
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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby Solace » Dec 24th, '11, 04:02

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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby mdemaz » Dec 24th, '11, 08:31

Sorry for sleeping on this bro, yo, good shit as usual.

I only got one small problem..
You seemed to be falling out of flow often..
41 seconds etc...

Yo, you know you don't have to prove to me you can do better, sometimes we have good days and bad days, but you know, try to keep your shit stepped up through each track man.

Peace.
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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby Atone » Dec 24th, '11, 14:57

HOLY SHIT DUDE!

1st of all, is there any way possible i can use that chorus? that is a very strong fucking chorus and it is very inspiring'

2nd, your flow on this is great, Sinima beats always has good production and you chose the right beat for this track, i could imagin this being a song for a boxing soundtrack or something to that effect.

2nd verse sounds odd, but it's still good, once again, I FUCKING LOVE THAT CHORUS
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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby Solace » Dec 24th, '11, 15:37

mdemaz wrote:Sorry for sleeping on this bro, yo, good shit as usual.

I only got one small problem..
You seemed to be falling out of flow often..
41 seconds etc...

Yo, you know you don't have to prove to me you can do better, sometimes we have good days and bad days, but you know, try to keep your shit stepped up through each track man.

Peace.

I don't see my flow fall off at all anywhere in this track, but thanks :y:

Atone The Underdog wrote:HOLY SHIT DUDE!

1st of all, is there any way possible i can use that chorus? that is a very strong fucking chorus and it is very inspiring'

2nd, your flow on this is great, Sinima beats always has good production and you chose the right beat for this track, i could imagin this being a song for a boxing soundtrack or something to that effect.

2nd verse sounds odd, but it's still good, once again, I FUCKING LOVE THAT CHORUS

Thanks Atone, it's cool you're loving the chorus too. I'd rather keep the chorus on this song though, sorry!
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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby Blu » Dec 25th, '11, 11:10

Solace, this is really good dude. Fuck. Not really good, it's incredible.

Do you have an accent? Or are my ears misleading me? It doesn't really bother me, the song is still excellent. The beat is awesome, and you flow nicely on it. The chorus is pretty fucking cool too, reminds me of some "'Till I Collapse" stuff.

Good job man. I'ma check some more of your songs out. :y:
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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby Solace » Dec 25th, '11, 16:22

Your ears are misleading you as far as I know, born in Canada and raised in the US and Canada so my accent reflects those dialects lol. I really appreciate that, "incredible" :worship: . Thanks Blu! :y:
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Re: Solace - Stand Tall

Postby Le Tunisien » Dec 30th, '11, 06:40

Solace wrote:
Big Ax-D wrote:I continue to be amazed by your quality, very very clean. I wanna try your mixing style, mind sharing, I wanna sound how I sound on that.

Want me to PM you how I mix it? Haha I'm glad you think it sounds good, I try to do the best with my shitty mic.


me too i like how it sounds, can you teach me how you mix to have that quality ? thankssss
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