Lighters Remix

[Cookzee]

LOF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=133375

Hey guys i did a lighters remix on youtube, here's the link to it, i did a very simple video, it's just a recording video really! hope you enjoy, tell me what you think

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XBWqUpxa ... ideo_title

lyrics:

by the time you hear this i would've already blown up
relatives hear me on the radio
they think it's a crazy show, seeing me young
to being grown up
i can drive now, so when i roll up
organising shows for the summer
my brothers wants to help
he's always have a place in my life
when coming up from under the slab
holding him down, i'll show him lifes funner
chuck him the crowd getting fine girls numbers
looking back at where i used to be
people never gave a second look until they knew it's me
girls using me, guys wanna fight me
the jealousy is crazy the envy's bonkers, im getting four or five wifey's
nobody's quite like me, so down to earth
this rides taking my faster im finna hit a curb
if you feeling hurt, baby make em eat the dirt
fuck this world harder than anyone make these bitches learn!
everythings crazy now, girls wanna stay a while
i can't see the change in me, but everyone just speaks about
me, im still the same person, i don't wanna ever change
i was bullied coz it's crazy the way im seeing things
so fuck it... god made me this way fucking
all opinions of the guys on same subject
i was making hits when i weren't allowed in pubs yet
so how can guys who can't hold a note, be allowed to fucking judge it
i been set free now im finna go
pick up my phone, reaching out to mister crow
tell him meet at the spot where we first met
pick up where we left off, i know he heard that
aiyo fingaz, man im sad you had to go
just know i'll always think of when i am on the road
so let's all march together in this bitch
more than music grow!

[Ka0t1c]

not bad, it was pretty cool, just hard for me to get used to hearing your accent

[Cookzee]

bump

[Eedee]

That was nice. I was actually thinking of doing this myself, make a Lighters remix. You beat me to it (doesn't mean I wont' do it though ) but anyway, your lyrics were on beat and you had great rhymes. It was enjoyable to listen to, no doubt about that. Good work.

PS - Lots of accents on this forum.

[Chet Starr]

dude the accent is brilliant I don't know how people could have problems with understanding you. I can't understand Devlin but I can hear you crystal clear

But fuck that, this is great dude. I remember listening to your Katy Perry remix, constant great tunes man.

[mdemaz]

I can't really point out anything wrong with this other then the delivery.

Sometimes it's hard for everyone to stay coherent, but I felt that slightly.
Just work on that and you'll be fine dudes.]

Keep this shit up.

[Cookzee]

thanks guys i appreciate the feedback

[Ticalrecords]

i def liked the content, but sometimes it was really hard to understand what you were saying becuz of your accent. good thing you had the lyrics printed. the flow was pretty good, sometimes the delivery was off but over all it was nice as it gets. btw tht guy can sing


i got a song up too, tell me what you think

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=142444

[4NorthTL]

The flow was just about perfect. The singer wasn't bad, but I wasn't feeling him very much. The rapping was great though, do you write your own lyrics or just cover?

[Cookzee]

always write my own stuff