Solace - I'm On One (Freeverse)

[Solace]

Here is my feedback Link but I don't want anyone seeing this verse anymore 'cause it was wack lmao.

[Atone]

you sound like Ryu man thats pretty cool tho, i like the beat, in the beginning sounds like were underwater lol, your flow is good, if you ever do a full version let me know

by the way i put this link up on my twitter and facebook for ya

[_Ironic_]

listenin

I love the delivery at times, and hate it at others...sometimes the pause sounds really good and done well..other times it sounds awkward..
the mixing on this doesn't sound very good..not a big fan
your voice lacks confidence at times...the flow wasn't quite there..but this was still a pretty decent short track.. the trick with a slow flow is you need way more emotion in your voice to fill out the pauses, otherwise it sounds awkward..slow flows are one of the harder ones to do just because theres more space to work with and sometimes people get lost to the beat...it wasn't bad but it wasn't great either

overall if this song was longer it'd probably be a lil better but this isn't terrible.

6/10

RTF on my track if u get the chance, "Ransom

[Eedee]

Uhhh

Okay... the beat was okay, wasn't terrible, wasn't good either. Your flow... I like when you continue to the next bar smoothly, none of the "yeah yeah" "fame fame" "cash cash" stuff. Irks me, but you have your style so I can't totally bash it, just saying I don't really enjoy it.

Lyrics were good as always, love the Anakin punchline there, freakin' awesome. Your delivery really isn't suited for slow tempo flow. Sounds more like it would be great on a Fast Lane / On Fire type track. But nonetheless, it isn't as cringe-worthy as some on here...

Sorry I didn't see this drop sooner, Solace. I apologize.

[Solace]

Thanks guys, I definitely can see how this isn't the greatest to listen to, so I'm just gonna private that link to the video hahaa.

[Joel Venom]

i peeped this the other time i came around, and i have to say it wasnt all that great. i think you need to work on your delivery in order to get to where you want to be. the flow was good but just edit the way you emphasize on tracks. it will help you in the long run.