NEW STEVE SPAG - Pabst & Jazz Refill (Ash Roth Remix)

[Steve Spag]

Well here's my latest track like I promised. Just did a little remix to this new Asher Roth track, added a verse after everyone dropped off. Nothing too serious, just rhyming for fun, hope you enjoy as much as I do!

YouTube; http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oR-FMQamFcQ
Soundclick; http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11349240

Lyrics;

yeah, it's a rap motherfuckers
yeah i'm back motherfuckers
it's a new day and i'm feeling pretty great
yes i do blaze, so roll me some weed
i got a lot going down tonight
i'll be locked in the studio
pot and me while i cross some lines
shots of rye with coke, my frosted mind
will soon be warmed up like a scorching fire
now it's burning, it's consumed me
you'll soon learn when you're on your knees
i keep burning all these doobies
straight to my head, it's what soothes steve
spag's got love for the music and green
now watch me shoot up these streets
metaphorically i'm nuking with speech
to bring the natural life back
i've had it with ipad's
if it were up to me, i think we would time travel
("i'm so lost right now….uuhhh, where we going?")
to the past, get some pabst and ass
and relax on the beach to some magic jazz
shut your trap, get baked to the last hit
i'm wasted like trash bins incase you've been askin'
so don't bother testing me, this ain't your destiny
i've had it with everyone, who'll be the next to leave?
that's what i'm wondering as i bring the thunder in
feeling like i'm a god who comes up with tons of hits
osama bin laden's gone so who's the new terrorist?
don't confuse 'em with steven spag who's lyrically scarin' kids

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[Scrubz]

Overall it was great.

Heres a few notes:
-Vocals were louder than the others tho.
-Flow was great bro, props.
-Delivery was great at times, and decent in some sports
-I think you have the same trouble as I do with the hiss. I think rolling off the highs and the trebel a -little will help. But be careful not to do it to much or else it will give a dull quality.
-This was by far the best mixing you have done even with the track were doing.
-Lyrics and concept was good!

8.5/10

[Steve Spag]

Good looking out bro, thanks for the feedback, glad you're noticing the improvement in mixing, this track I just finished editing sounds EVEN better! I tried to get my vocal level to match theirs but it just wasn't happening, but I can't say I'm surprised because I was recording on a track that was already recorded on so the quality was bound to get a little distorted, but it's just a fun song so it doesn't really matter to me that much since I'm not really pushing this for anything.

Keep the feed coming!

[B.A.D.]

hey man, the beat is amazing. I've never heard that Asher Roth song.... he sucks tho' lol. But its a really funky track.

is that Big Boi on the second verse??... man, that was great.

uuuh, your vocals are again wayyyy to high, lmao, I don't know what you keep doing that all your new songs have very high volume of your vocals, you really have to fix that.

but man, your flow was brilliant, all on beat, nice delivery as-well,g ood job man, handled yourself pretti good

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed man, I'll return the favour when I get in this afternoon!
& nahh that's not Big Boi, lol, it's Hassani Kwess & Kenny Keys, not really sure who spits what or anything since I've never heard of these guys before, just going from what Asher posted, lol.