AhdduB - Easy Money

[Ticalrecords]

this is my remix to ASAP Rocky's Peso, tell me what yall think


POF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=142580


http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/easy-money-peso-remix


Whatup world – we all gooned up,
five in the studio with two blunts
a bottle of jack and a blue cup
watch how my head balloons up
as I feel myself – and I’m feeling good
test me – I wish ya really would,
I got all the time in the world to waste,
Say my fucking name was ya first mistake/
So fuck whatever yo girl would say,
I got the type of dick she gotta learn to take
Head full of acid – that works in ways
that when the sun hits you itll burn ya face
From get go – I’m retro
Slave to the game – yall are sex sold
Over here calling girls metro
cuz we run trains - onto the next hoe/




back again – mister acid head,
I know yall gonna laugh at this
From here on out I’m blasphemous
And As subtle as my Indian accent is
Oh god – he so raw,
Wait did he just commit a fuax pa?
That shit there was my old style,
The only cosign – is the gold I /
Don’t have hanging from my own neck
I’m surprised my brains aint blown yet,
Mo money – mo’ stress
That’s why I don’t need that chrome tech
No ends – come and go friends,
Whats the homie to do but smoke when,
all ya problems are on some grown shit
A Fifth in the cup yea we gon wreck

[Nefarious]

I wasnt digging the chorus that much but the verses were written and recorded pretty well, i dont have much else to say about it, its a really easily listenable song, so i guess the name suits the vibe it gives.

Your flow was pretty much flawless for the way you wrote, your the kinda rapper that noone could spit ur verse better than you or atleast thats the way i hear it.

[Ticalrecords]

thanks for the feedback man, one more thing, how was my flow on this one?

[B.A.D.]

oh wow that is a horrible beat hahah, who is this ASAP rocky guy?

hey, u need to fix the way that you mix your verses man. sounded weak, needed power, volume was too low. keep an eye on that, its important.

I liked your flow, the lyrics not soooo much, but I do appreciate the effort into them, just not my style of word placing if you get my deal. lol

I guess it was alright, the flow was really good btw, the hook kinda boring.

but my biggest advice for you would be to work on the mixdown

keep at it bro
mind rtf on any of this two?

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=135653
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=142587

cheers bruv

[Tranquil]

The beat is horrible! I had the huge urge to just turn it off but I didn't. Your flow was good, your delivery and lyrics could use a little touch up though! Also you could try and do some ad-libs to make your verse stand out more, and some better mixing. It was an alright track but for me it has no reply what so ever, keep recording though man! I'll be on the lookout!

[Ticalrecords]

thanks for the feedback...bump