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Ordinary Girl

Postby 4NorthTL » Feb 9th, '12, 05:42

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Re: Ordinary Girl

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 9th, '12, 17:48

first thing off you really need to work on the mixing, it doesn't sound good at all. the lyrics were nice and raunchy i was feeling it. i liked the chorus...very dirty haha. i liked how you switched up your flow a few times, i was def feeling that too. just work on that mixing cuz sometimes its hard to understand what your saying. good stuff tho

would you mind returning the favor? viewtopic.php?f=38&t=143165
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Re: Ordinary Girl

Postby preest » Feb 12th, '12, 01:04

I think that the beat lack a bit of depth to be honest, I thought the hook was catchy but maybe the EQ's need to be played with a bit as the sound quality (mixing) was pretty dull. lyrically I felt like it was good, could be improved but it was a good listen and the content was good too. Your overall mic presence lacked a bit of energy but thats not too savage.

overall its got a lot of potential and anything I feel needs to be worked on is just things that come with time.

Keep up the good work bro.
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