by preest » Feb 12th, '12, 01:04
I think that the beat lack a bit of depth to be honest, I thought the hook was catchy but maybe the EQ's need to be played with a bit as the sound quality (mixing) was pretty dull. lyrically I felt like it was good, could be improved but it was a good listen and the content was good too. Your overall mic presence lacked a bit of energy but thats not too savage.
overall its got a lot of potential and anything I feel needs to be worked on is just things that come with time.
Keep up the good work bro.