by M-Pyre » Feb 17th, '12, 21:49
beat is awesome ! all flows and styles fit perfectly. lyrics are dope and so is your chorus, tho it could be a bit fuller to achieve that full effect. now for the downers but nothing that can't be fixed.
all vocals need to be louder, cause as of now it seems that your vocals are getting drowned out by the full beat, which brings me to the next thing. tell/ask the/your producer to lower the volume of the piano, cause thats the main thing that keeps drowning you out.
overall, pretty fucking awesome. don't let my critique stop you or keep you down cause this song is fire! lyrical orgasm haha.
hope I helped! peace
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