by Solace » Mar 3rd, '12, 17:12
The production was really dope. I like the sample of whoever saying "It was a nightmare" and how you used that as a panned overlay when you said it. A lot of it I didn't feel made sense though, your content of the lyrics.
The fate of life is like a painted knife,
And when you wake at night a naked eye come say goodbye,
My pagan wife is saving I, this raising mic,
A placing for the both of I to poke ya eye,
I'm hearing this and I'm like, what the fuck? I'm sure you possibly have some concocted reasoning for lines like these, but they're so oddly written even your metaphors of whatever you wanted to come across will never go through the minds of anyone; and that's not because you're being complex it's because you're just writing stuff that doesn't make much sense. I hope you don't try to get away with this stuff all over the album 'cause as much as you sound good, I would hope that you make sense as well.
My favourite part of this is your flow, besides one part where you try and go faster and you run out of breath and save yourself with the nightmare sample the first time. Some of it was rushed in those lines, and it just sounded a little try hard there. I'm talking about around 1: 20. Your delivery is as usual really controlled and dope. The "hunter" part was a little odd to hear, (head hunter), but that's pure nitpicking. Good track besides the lyrics in some places. I really enjoyed listening to it, and it's probably going onto my iPod.