AhdduB - Paranoia From That Marijuana

[Ticalrecords]

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heres another one

http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/paranoia-f ... -marijuana


Whatup world – I got some problems
it’s a damn shame when these pills can solve em
a bottle of a jack and a revolver
dirty hotel room and a call girl
god damn - it’s a small world
especially - when its all yours
sometimes its gets really lonely
sometimes ya get to feeling phony/
even with - ya own damn friends
like every talk a pre planned test
of faith - just wait – you’ll face –the fate
of snakes – that shed their skin – as in
whites acting black – and vice versa
fakery is the worst sin I’ve heard of,
so if your like me – as you might be
then you’ve come - to the right scene//
this is a war against paranoia
usually caused by marijuana
im telling you - I swear im tired
of thinking my friends are wearing wires
swear to god – I’m a laughing stock
a fifth in me I’m still the last to talk
I just shut down – and I love how
Since I’m a rapper I’m expected to bust out/
A rap on command – this is not the plan
I didn’t sign up to be a constant strand
Of conversation – i’m not just asian
I’m not black or white and I got a face it
In this world I’m neither here nor there
This world sucks – they don’t care whats fair
Fuck it - I gotta keep straddling the line
Rolling the dice and gambling for mine//
No one cares – I don’t expect them to
Unless of course its affecting you
In which case –step the fuck up
I got a talent for shit you say is dumb luck
Front like a blood? - whatup blood
whatup cuz – that whatup thug
and the only fucked up answer
Should be that whatup gangster!///

[Steve Spag]

Haha, now this is a song I can relate to! Lyrics are awesome, flow matches, just like the last track a bitttttt too aggressive though. Other than that this is a pretty enjoyable song, can't wait to hear what type of shit you'll be on in a few years if you keep at it!

[Ticalrecords]

bump

[Scrubz]

Ha i agree with steve cool track and i ca relate but you are to agressive wit the delivery and the rhymes were pretty amateur, no offense. You got skills man keep at it and go harder!

[Solace]

The beat was awesome. Unlike what Spag said, I felt the flow was choppy but it got better as you progressed. The mixing was pretty boring, try having fun with it. It would make your vocals on this sound less bland. Especially dealing with a dub step sort of beat, you can't go on it without having some "sound" of your own to back you up, otherwise it sounds out of place and it doesn't give the atmosphere that you're actually apart of the song rather than just going over a beat. Hopefully you understand where I'm getting at with that. Your voice/delivery in this really reminds me of an old member on TRShady, Ice Killa/Stareotype.

Now I don't usually ask for people to return feed but it'd be nice if you checked this out since no one else is lol.

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