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Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

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Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Solace » Apr 6th, '12, 01:39

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I break necks and rip in the brain, yes,
I'm living to make cheques, but given what paid less,
I stay stressed but winning the great test,
Getting ready and steady for dominion of apex,
I taste death, and I flow tight,
If I don't write, I'd have no control of what the fuck I say next,
In the same breath, I would kick a verse twice,
Spit it back in backwards, memorize the words right,
Your worst nightmare, fighting so grand,
With nothing but motherfucking little mic in my hand,
I hold a javelin weapon,
Only stabbing intestines of every damn wack battle contestant,
With the caliber mentioned, every track I invented,
Every rap, every sentence, that I merely managed to blend with,
I'm making amateurs breathless,
I do backflips blindfolded when I travel dimensions.
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 6th, '12, 01:58

Nice, flow was on point, nothin rushed or forced..only thing that I notice negatively was the vocal volume..its a bit loud, maybe bring it down 2-3dB..or normalize it to about 92% whatever your more comfortable doing without affecting the quality..and its not really needed, but maybe some mid-range hiss reduction..
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Solace » Apr 6th, '12, 15:22

Damn, I always find it that I mess up on the vocal levels...Alright man, thanks for listening; it's always appreciated.
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby _Steven_ » Apr 6th, '12, 15:31

I enjoy the loud vocals, make the lyrics stand out a lot more, flow was awesome as usual from you and the verse was tight.

good verse bro
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Solace » Apr 6th, '12, 18:58

Thanks Steven, good the vocal levels didn't bother you. This was the verse I was gonna use for our collab but I decided to keep it for myself lmao.
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Trimss » Apr 6th, '12, 19:10

Man the intensity.. I loved this piece. Why don't you promote yourself on other sites? Like studioleaks or whatever?
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Solace » Apr 6th, '12, 19:17

Idk, I feel I should though lol. Thank you Trimss.
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Solace » Apr 7th, '12, 05:22

Menzo wrote:Why are you yelling? It hurts my ears, you fell off!

Oh wait, this isn't Eminem.

A feeling a deja vu...

Menzo wrote:This was good man, flow was on point and the delivery was something I don't think I've ever heard from you. Lyrics were obviously tight, just keep at it homie.

Thanks Menzo. :8)

Geno wrote:Dope verse, you know I like it son!

Thanks Geno :y:
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Solace » Apr 7th, '12, 15:46

Smh Menzo biting...Stop letting Spyder influence you.
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby DƎRDYPK » Apr 7th, '12, 16:01

good stuff Solace, like I said before I'm digging the Anonymous-like delivery.
& i dunno what else to say cause you'v got your shit layed down pretty much
come summer you better be busting out more than one verse tracks though :p
you're too smooth to be doing that forever, so bust out some songs bra!!!
& definitely do a song with a verse like this with Anonymous, on some Farewell Remix shit.
cause that'd be dope as bath salts my dude.
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby _Steven_ » Apr 7th, '12, 16:28

Solace wrote:Smh Menzo biting...Stop letting Spyder influence you.



:laughing: you evil shot firing mudderfecker!
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Solace » Apr 7th, '12, 17:24

DƎRDYPK wrote:good stuff Solace, like I said before I'm digging the Anonymous-like delivery.
& i dunno what else to say cause you'v got your shit layed down pretty much
come summer you better be busting out more than one verse tracks though :p
you're too smooth to be doing that forever, so bust out some songs bra!!!
& definitely do a song with a verse like this with Anonymous, on some Farewell Remix shit.
cause that'd be dope as bath salts my dude.

Yes in the summer I'll definitely be trying to record full songs, and I'mma be getting a new mic as well so it'll sound better quality wise. Haha a Farewell Pt 2 or something, definitely. But the same dope chorus. Thanks for listening bro.

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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Solace » Apr 15th, '12, 15:56

Bump.
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby cityfan31 » Apr 20th, '12, 10:05

This was well good.

I wish I had an American accent so I could record just one verse. British rappers sound shit.
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Re: Solace - 17 Candles Freeverse

Postby Solace » Apr 20th, '12, 13:04

Thanks man, and tbh I love British accents...Lowkey, Rhyme Asylum members, Ed Sheeran, and Devlin all have dope voices. Makes you sound elegant to an American ear (well a lot would beg to differ but still...)
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