AhdduB - Aderol

[Ticalrecords]

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heres another drug song haha


http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/aderol-prod-by-ear2thabeat


Chilling out – lord willing now
those pills – what I’m still about
I could overdose – and not give a fuck
We Comatose – aint you sick of us?
Get rid of us? Ridiculous
The jig is up – roll another swisha up
I smoke till I’m brain dead
And start seeing morphing faces/
Dollars rolled up – gotta snort up
That retalin aderol and coke up
Yes I am – off my rocker
I believe X – cured my posture
So get it twisted – as my spine
With a straighter edge – then my line
Of coke – drum roll – numb nose – gung ho
Blunt smoke –just toked –like what the fuck yo/
I think - I’m going off again
numb from the acid blotter binge
I’m geeking out – yea freaking out
Ten blotters – and I’m peaking now
Pillow talk – with that ego loss
Girls love to see – that rillo sparked
Handle nine eleven – like reno cops
Pissing blood while my PO watch/
Don’t give a fuck – I’m still high
Twelve shots and I feel fine
Couple pills – and I will die
And this is all – in real time
So fuck em all – I got problems
But I got bros - like the Allmans
the whipping post - to that bull whip
The wolf skin – to that wool bitch/
When we fucked – I seemed cool
But I pissed in your gene pool
So yes – I need drugs
And the money stashed in yo C cup
Aint shit – you can teach us
From saucer eyes to mean mugs
I stay high – and may I
Wave to the ladies that say hi/
Mercy me – oh mercy me
Wearing bikinis and dirty jeans
these Hoes say that I don’t care
and its All because I won’t pair
Two rhymes together – yea high as ever
Don’t give a fuck – its now or never
That aderol – that alcohol
High as hell – playing basketball/
like the swishing of a chain net
like the concrete on some scraped skin
I’m telling ya - I aint mad at yall
The definition of self sabotage
I’m a rabid dog – yea no water
Just more drink – I go harder
Cuz If not – then why bother
Jay said it and so did my father

[Eedee]

The vocals seemed a bit too loud over the beat (you pick great beats though!)

The lyrics rhyme wise were good, to be honest, I don't like songs about drugs and shit, guess that's just me. But anyway, your flow was weird, kept squeezing in a bunch of syllables a lot. Same voice as all your other tracks: that sarcastic one.

Keep working and dropping, I'll definitely feed.

[Ticalrecords]

thanks for the feedback man, much appreciated

[Phantom]

i agree with eedee. lyrics are nice i like them alot, just feels like your flow is rushed in some places, but thatll come with experience. your on the right track man, keep up the progression

[Solace]

If only I bumped this on 4/20 while I rolled AhdduB At least now I know how to pronounce your rap alias.

I was actually pretty cool with your flow in most parts. Your vocal quality gets drowned out a little bit though, doesn't feel like your voice is what we're intended to hear, if you understand what I'm saying. Maybe raise the mids (I raise them to 4 to get really nice clarity, but this is just a mere suggestion). I've told you this before, but your voice would sound much better with overlays..adlibs...anything other than this just one boring vocal track. Make me feel like I'm hearing a FULL song. You know? Anyway yeah man, keep droppin'.

[Trimss]

heard this on the demaz vid, I really liked it lol.