AhdduB - Rambling Like A Drunkard

[Ticalrecords]

heres me going in for two minutes straight. if you like the aderol song this should be right up your alley. hope you like it..


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http://soundcloud.com/ahddub/rambling-l ... nkard-prod


I said it once ill say it again
Im just looking for different ways to offend
The general public – so listen close
Most of yall are highly misinformed
most of my job’s been done for me
but on the real foreal I’d love to see
the lil homie counting them benjamins
My one goal is to spread ignorance/
Paranoia cynicism and pessimism
greed avarice and hedonism
I’m just here to make this world a mess
Ha see I don’t turn to girls for stress
That nervousness – is perfect with
Those bugged eyes – and I chug my
Beer and stare back – she flips her hair back
Winks - and takes a sip of her drink/
I think – yes - I’ma fuck tonight
The smile – I had sure was a sight,
She leans back and downs a shot
Seconds till we fuck – I’m counting off
Four for the money – three for the show
Two for the blondie – one for the dro
That got this girl to say to you
Follow me to the ladies room/
Fuck on the baby changing table
if she got pregnant it be shameful
ironic too – oh what a scandal
tangle with a dad who’ll leave you mangled
thank god you can run in sandals
leave that bitch when she starts to ramble
I stay strapped – for angry dads
Look how I upped the ante man/
pansys man – smoking banshee man
That loud like my suit is that fancy man
That purple – like raekwon’s tape
Deciphering the lingo takes all day
as orange as dare’s a darkside
Luda eminem and I got our styles
From the same tape – muddy waters
redman was the first with a funny aura/
I’m giving props where its due
Influenced me more than my parents do
Cheap thrills – steely dan
feel me man – really man?
Stick ya up in a small room with a ceiling fan
Put ya hands up– put a grand up
In hospital bills – who’s laughing now?
Guarantee a hater aint acting out /
Swear to god - I’m shocking and awing
And holy crap - my god she’s a hottie
Who is this girl? – I walk over
Perfume couldn’t hide she’s a pot smoker
sweet that’ll do all the talking for her
so I get up and tap her on the shoulder
whatsup girl – I’m ahddub
you know your daddy won’t approve me/
So lets make some stupid mistakes
They say ya learn something new everyday
So what do ya say – do I interest you?
With my gold watch and my business suit
I bet ya act a slut – with that camera
when I pull up in that two door acura
whatever girl - I’m so cool
no chain – no jewels/
got a rollie - that’s the focal
point when I’m around the locals
boy oh boy am I sleazy
don’t trust what you see on TV
the watch don’t help in this hell hole
but it distracts you from the ash on my elbows
so fuck it girl – give me more ice
that changes colors like coors light/

[TripleNineThree]

Lyrics - the lyrics were REALLY good - 9.5/10

Delivery - This was good but could use some work, it could be the quaity that makes it sound like the delivery is lacking - 7/10

Flow - This is pretty good for the most part but there are parts that I feel personally that it falls off, overall though you flow pretty nice to this beat - 8/10

Quality - This is what could be upped which I know isn't easy if you don't have the money to invest in a better mic but you could maybe throw some more reverbs, eqs, compressors, ect.. on your voice - 7/10

Goodjob man! - Overall - 8/10

[Ticalrecords]

thanks man i appreciate the listen

[Instant Legend]

not bad here homie, beats trippin me out a little bit - but you're ridin the beat well - would like to hear a little more fluency in the tongue flippin, but i like this shit here - you kept it goin proper

good shit homie

keep it movin my dude

[Ticalrecords]

hey thanks man i appreciate the listen

[Solace]

Do you use any reverb at all? Your voice sounds so flat lol, I think it would sound so much nicer with a close reverb. Delivery is somewhat nasal, I think you could use more emphasis on areas, it's like some areas it's perfect and others it's awkward. Word to IL, beat is trippy. Flow was nice, I like how there's barely any pauses.

[Ticalrecords]

thanks guys i appreciate the listen. @ Solace, yea i don't use any reverb, i have a newer song where i use it at a 13% and its a noticeable difference. thanks for the tip

[Kez]

Beat is stock "gangsta" shit obviously found off Soundclick. Not a fan.

You sound a bit like Watsky, but you really don't fit this beat with that voice. Trying to flow fast but you slip quite a few times, and the lyrics aren't particularly interesting, there's nothing you're really saying. Some multis in there, yeah not too bad, whatever. Your intro and outro had a sarcasm you didn't seem able to inject into the verses.

>So what do ya say – do I interest you?
With my gold watch and my business suit
I bet ya act a slut – with that camera
when I pull up in that two door acura

C'mon, you don't have an acura or a suit. Boring.

I saw you had posted a bunch of songs recently in this section so I listened to this to see what you're like. At the moment, nothing to interest me to listen to the rest of your stuff. Once you develop a bit more then there might be something worth checking out. Overall, not particularly awful by any means, just average.

[Ticalrecords]

loll actually i do have an acura my man thats why i talk about it but its all good thanks for the listen