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Rock Star - Cookzee

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Rock Star - Cookzee

Postby Cookzee » Jun 14th, '12, 14:14

Hey guys i made a song called Rock Star for my new mixtape and wanted to get your views on it and see what you think! :)

link: http://www.mediafire.com/?n3zy79cyzsyj2ck

i know that you've heard me, cookzee aint it made a mixtape yeah im kinda famous
on you playlist, listen in class, man don't be alarmed when teachers crave it
your folks hate it, so do mine, tell them bozo's better stand in line
if they wanna take this crown off my head boy, they better control the time
could speed it up but i'll slow it down
you pick it up and i throw it out
what you guys tryna polite for? middle fingers up an show it round
look at the attention this has gotten me
use freedom of speech mixed with angry geek philiosphoy!

im a rockstar...
so gather up a follow me
im a rockstar
so sour they can't swallow me!
look at the attention this has gotten me
use freedom of speech mixed with angry geek philiosphoy!
x2

so march with me
come mosh with me
maybe then you'll see
what this all means
when these guys percieve
every breath you breathe
to be something from a dream they seek it
x2

what? you aint impressed, you wanna see me stretch, see me bend
till i've snapped, then you're gonna laugh, an i'll never to live to rap again
tell your kids to quit listening if you aint really into this
don't mean to flip but that's your job aint you heard of censorship
na-na-na i'll just keep rapping towards the bastards who's had it
with stupid labels that get attached like magnets attacking em UHHH!
look at the attention this has gotten me
use freedom of speech mixed with angry geek philiosphoy!

chorus
x2

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Re: Rock Star - Cookzee

Postby B.A.D. » Jun 15th, '12, 05:46

word of advice bro, use a streaming site to upload your stuff, that way you will get more listens.

www.limelinx.com
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Re: Rock Star - Cookzee

Postby mdemaz » Jun 15th, '12, 05:56

Cool guitars and drumming.

You got a nice flow, the hook sounds a bit weak, though.
Other than that, I see no other flaws.

Keep it up.
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