by Trimss » Jul 15th, '12, 19:11
I'm totally wack at giving reviews and feedback but I'll try.
Wolves Among Sheeps: The beat is amazing, props to Rise. And your delivery is actually better than on older tracks, it seems like you're actually giving some passion and energy. I liked this.
The Fringe: I liked this too. Some adlibs were weird (like when you were layering your rhymes but just talking, sometimes it sounded off) but it was pretty cool overall. Pretty chill, and good content. Good sample too, with the missing link.
Praise The King: This sounds like another backpack rapper track with no real originality or anything that really stands out. I didn't like this, sorry bro. And the hook could've been OK if the mixing/layering was executed better. But it was a pretty good idea. Props still.
Metaphor Warfare: Mhh, it's ok I guess. You're spazzing on this one, flowing rhymes after rhymes, punchlines after punchlines. It's pretty cool. Not really my type.
12 steps: The beat is too loud, or the vocals are too low. I can't really listen with headphones right now so I'll pass this one.
sorry that wasn't a big ass feedback like some can do here, but i didn't want to let your thread flop!
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