Eedee - "Let's Get It Started" (ft. Mat Demaz & Spyder)

[Eedee]

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=147313

* Produced by RockItPro.com
* First track and only single off my upcoming 11 track "Smokey Memories" mixtape, dropping soon. Enjoy and keep your eyes open for this mixtape!

Link: http://www.reverbnation.com/eedee


LYRICS:

[Verse 1: Eedee]
This hiatus from recording, bet you fuckers didn't notice it,
Enjoy it? Went from under the radar and man, "HOLY SHIT!"
I'm back motherfuckers, I'm up in your face now,
This rap's undercover as my evil fucking play style.
Cuz on the surface looking down I'm only worthless,
Far away from perfect, sometimes I see no purpose.
It hurts, bitch, but I strive forward anyway,
This rap shit is mine and I'd die for it any day.
I want to connect to you musically,
I want that respect I'm working for and for you to see.
I have what it takes, and this rap comes with stakes,
But when I'm jammed up for days till this pad fucking breaks.
That I worked for it, and I stay up with red eyes,
Till my verse has been perfected only then is it bed time.
Maybe next time you faggots can try to make me cry,
If it's all in my head I'm anxious to fucking face the lie!

[Chorus: Eedee]
Let's Get It Started, let's hit the road, Jack,
No slack for the others, we'll never go back.
Don't blast off if you can't hold rap,
So fast when we blow that you don't know crap!

[Verse 2: Mat Demaz]
I'm sick of the shit everyone can suck my dick
vile pricks I'll make you paraplegics with an fucken ice pick
gay fags think they're soo good because they make cash
they rap like shit but they still get the grey stacks
pompous is what they are I wanna stomp em
snob punks they are gonna get motherfucken bum rushed
hatred flows through me until I'm fucken wasted
stray kids love me and I'm hated by traitors
I crush my enemies and leave them in the dry dust
why bust whack shit when I'm dropping this fine stuff
planets shake when every time I bust god dammit
men shit themselves and run away like fucken bandits
storms rage when I'm near you're downfall is your fate
born sane but I went nuts at a small age
get fucked fuck your cheesy rap beef and set ups
let's gut everyone in our path and infect sluts

[Verse 3: Spyder]
No more Mr. Nice guy I’m stopping the kindness
You mockin my writin I’m responding with violence.
Force of tornado rocking the tides with
Power of Earth and comets came along in alignment.
Insomniac, pop open my eyelids
You worship me like you saw God in my iris.
Horn of a rhino and jaw of a lion
Scorn with the fire believe I’m more than a tyrant.
Picture me with a sword croppin your spine and,
The man who took a slingshot to Goliath.
Jackin a plane straight bombin the pilot
Result of Hitler and Khan formed an alliance.
Born with a mind with scorpions inside it
Keep head buttin you till they fall out my sinus.
Crystal ball has me like Morpheus writin
Tiger claw swipe and leave all with my virus.

[mdemaz]

I went in hard.
Some of my lyrics are wrong; I was in a hurry and didn't proofread.

My bad.

This verse will be on one of my new albums, though.

Eedee:
Nice verse; nothing new here, but you have improved a lot since last year.
Keep elevating.

Spyder:
Your flow needs a lot of work, other than that, great delivery and lyrics.

Good song to start off this mixtape.

Edit:
Lol at your verse, Eedee.
You were talking about how you got hardly any sleep and shit and you'd be still awake at like 5 AM.

[Eedee]

I went in hard.
Some of my lyrics are wrong, I was in a hurry and didn't proof read.

My bad.

This verse will be on one of my new albums, though.

Eedee:
Nice verse, nothing new here, but you have improved a lot since last year.
Keep elevating.

Spyder:
Your flow needs a lot of work, other than that, great delivery and lyrics.

Good song to start off this mixtape.

For sure. This mixtape should be good. I hope people enjoy it.

[Trimss]

This was pretty cool, Demaz I don't know what's up but when you started screaming I didn't expect it and kinda scared me lmao. Your pronunciation was getting better, though I feel this one is maybe rushed on your part.

Eedee, your verse was pretty cool. Seems like when you rap.. I don't know, seems like you're changing your intonation too much. Spyder had this problem too, but I think it's kinda better now.

Also Spyder, that "you worship me like you saw God in my iris" line was great as fuck.

[mdemaz]

All I wanna do is scream, lol.

[Spyder]

demaz sorry bro but i think my flow is right on point with this one, smooth. no lines sped up, and hit he snare same place everytime. but thanks for peeping.

and trimss, thank the fucking lord hahah i concentrated on THAT specifically, tried to keep the same tone throughout the track ahah, if no one said it was better i was gonna be like...FUCK
but thanks for the lyrical feed too

EDIT:will feed the verses of you two in a bit

[TripleNineThree]

Verse 1
Best verse on the song. Your quality is really good and the mixing actually sounds pretty good; better than your other tracks - did you do something different? I'm really feeling the quality on your verse. Your deliver and flow is also really good!

Chorus
The chorus is pretty simple but it works with this beat. Were you trying to get that singing sound that Eminem does? You mite want to turn up the deep part a tad bit the next time you record a hook like that; just my opinion. Overall it's good!

Verse 2
I couldn't understand most of your words if I didn't look at your lyrics. Your delivery was good because you had a lot of emotion but your quality and mixing wasn't the best. Once again, if you're going to rap with that much energy make sure you pronounce your words clearly

Verse 3
This is a quality up from most of your tracks Spyder. I was enjoying your verse. Only real big thing I notice mixing wise is I feel there is too much bass in your voice. Other than that you had a good verse, your flow and delivery was steady throughout the whole song


Overall - great job guys! As I replay the song the chorus is starting to grow on me.

Do you guys mind returning the feed? - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=147653

[Spyder]

thanks man, bout the bass idk man thats prob just my voice haha always deep toned
when i was raising the pitch is when i had that flucuation i think.
but thanks for the peep man

[TripleNineThree]

No problem! And yeah, you don't edit the bass out when you rap. After you record your vocals, you can go in and change the EQ so your voice fits the beat. At least I know you can in Mixcraft - not sure about other programs

[Spyder]

idk as far as EQ i edit the lows mids and highs, that the only EQ i know about in Cool Edit lol
but i might take u up on that offer of you mixing a track ahah, i might have something comming up soon

[Eedee]

Thanks for the feed, Triple! (I already fed that track, btw)

I just put some bass boost EQ and some compression and a hard limiter on my vocals I think for my verse.

And the hook wasn't going for the singing style of Em. I added the deep part and turned it down so it would add depth but not jumble it. Glad you love the hook!

Thanks again.

[mdemaz]

Thanks for peeping everyone!
I'm still ironing out the kinks, but I'm getting there!

[Eedee]

Thanks for peeping everyone!
I'm still ironing out the kinks, but I'm getting there!

For sure.

That delivery was brutal.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

This was a great track guys!! @ eedee you murdered it man great flow all the way through it stayed smooth and awesome rhymes! Also awesome mixing as always!
@ mdemaz you had nice lyrics man its just hard to understand and you flowed pretty good the whole way through nice job!

@ Spyder, as always you had a great verse man! it flowed pretty good and you had some awesome lines in there! great rhyming also, not much else I can say being as all 3 of yall know more about mixing t han I do haha so great track !! this will be an awesome mixtape dude.

[Ticalrecords]

pretty cool, i remember hearing the first guy a looong time ago, yo you have improved alot, good stuff man. flow is soo mch smoother now.

second guy, very hard to understand what you were saying but i liked the intensity for damn sure. however, i LOVED the voice crack in the middle of the verse, made my fucking day loll

third guy was smooth, not much to say that hasnt already been said.

only problem i have is with the chorus, i think yall cud have put a lil more umph into it cuz it sounds like yall are reading it off the paper, especially when your tryna hype the listener when you say "let's get it started"...it just sounds wrong loll.

would you mind giving me feedback on a song i just posted?

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