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Illmatic - Coffee & Pro Plus Prod. Slantize

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Illmatic - Coffee & Pro Plus Prod. Slantize

Postby ILLMATIC1992 » Aug 30th, '12, 12:09

Written by Illmatic
Produced By Slantize

Feedback much appreciated and returned.

LoF - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=147926&p=1975526#p1975526

Link to the track and lyrics:
http://soundcloud.com/illmatic1992/coffee-pro-plus
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Re: Illmatic - Coffee & Pro Plus Prod. Slantize

Postby TripleNineThree » Aug 30th, '12, 14:08

Read the rules before your post. You need to post a valid link of feedback that you gave another person in order to post your song. PM me a link and I will re-open your thread.

EDIT Re-opened thread. OP submitted a link of feed.
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Re: Illmatic - Coffee & Pro Plus Prod. Slantize

Postby Blu » Sep 1st, '12, 00:50

Did you mix this yourself? The beat sounds okay, nice and simple, but your voice seems off. Like it doesn't fit the beat. I'm guessing it's that way because of how it was mixed.

If you need help, just ask TripleNineThree, his mixing sounds great. :y:
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Re: Illmatic - Coffee & Pro Plus Prod. Slantize

Postby ILLMATIC1992 » Sep 1st, '12, 12:16

Blu wrote:Did you mix this yourself? The beat sounds okay, nice and simple, but your voice seems off. Like it doesn't fit the beat. I'm guessing it's that way because of how it was mixed.

If you need help, just ask TripleNineThree, his mixing sounds great. :y:


Yeah i did, still getting used to the mixing process and that, really just trying to teach myself but i'll give TripleNineThree a shout sometime.
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Re: Illmatic - Coffee & Pro Plus Prod. Slantize

Postby NoColor » Sep 2nd, '12, 07:45

Yeah the mixing may need work. But tight flow. Lotta slut talk which is definitely appreciated around here. Have you made a full song before (like with a hook and multiple verses)?
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Re: Illmatic - Coffee & Pro Plus Prod. Slantize

Postby ILLMATIC1992 » Sep 2nd, '12, 10:50

NoColor wrote:Yeah the mixing may need work. But tight flow. Lotta slut talk which is definitely appreciated around here. Have you made a full song before (like with a hook and multiple verses)?


I've recorded a few collab verses before for full songs but nothing solo wise yet, i was hoping i can get my mixing down first and then start although after next week i will be recording a batch of songs i've got written out and releasing certain ones, thanks for the feedback, only issue i think is the mixing but yeah, it was just a quick verse on subjects that were on my mind.
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