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S.K.Y.E Ft Vettori- Expect What your going to See

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S.K.Y.E Ft Vettori- Expect What your going to See

Postby Vettori » Sep 21st, '12, 23:23

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=148658 <----Link to feed

This is My friend S.K.Y.E on the first verse and first half of the chorus.
I'm on the middle verse, and ending of chorus.


Just releasing a few of the tracks iv'e been withholding.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qLaUwStM ... e=youtu.be

Feel free to leave some feedback. Even just letting me know if you enjoyed it.

Iv'e been busy as of late, and have access to better quality now.. This not being an example of it.
Ultimately I hope you guys enjoy this song. Not my best Imo, But it was fun.
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Re: S.K.Y.E Ft Vettori- Expect What your going to See

Postby TripleNineThree » Sep 24th, '12, 15:41

Beat - First off i loved the way this beat started out. I enjoyed the sound of the thunderstorm in the background and the beat fit perfectly with it because of the deep feeling to it. My favorite kind of beats

Flow - Your flow is alright on this song. Although I do hear you fall off pretty often which made it a tough listen. Overall it was alright though - 7/10

Quality - The quality wasn't the best which you said in the post - 6.5/10

Mixing - This is what needs work. There was waaay too much reverb and echo on the first verse and the chorus. The second verse sounded way better mixing wise and flow wise - 7/10

Lyrics - These sounded good for the most part. I couldn't understand some of the parts if I wasn't looking at the lyrics, they were still good though. - 8/10

Overall - Goodjob on this track man. The verses were all pretty decent, my favorite was the 2nd and then the next best was the third. I wasn't feeling the first verse. - 7/10
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Re: S.K.Y.E Ft Vettori- Expect What your going to See

Postby Vettori » Sep 25th, '12, 04:05

Thank you for the Feedback :D
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Re: S.K.Y.E Ft Vettori- Expect What your going to See

Postby Eedee » Sep 25th, '12, 21:55

The beat was great. I liked it a lot.

Your lyrics were great. You have got those down.

Mixing was great on your verse, too. Seemed to have great blend of reverb and EQ/compression.

The chorus was eh, the singing wasn't the best (I'm guilty of this too) but it wasn't TOO bad.

SKYE had a good verse too, hard to understand at times, though.

Good song, nonetheless. I liked it.
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Re: S.K.Y.E Ft Vettori- Expect What your going to See

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Sep 26th, '12, 14:54

Cool track man, It definitely had a catchy feel to it, I liked the hook. The rhyming was definitely good in this you kept it consistent through the whole thing, Some parts were hard to understand but the flow was on point for the most part. the mixing seemed to be pretty good and your delivery was pretty good as well dude, Keep it up! nice job
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Re: S.K.Y.E Ft Vettori- Expect What your going to See

Postby Vettori » Sep 26th, '12, 19:23

Thank you guys very much :)
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