Nefarious - Better Than Ever

[Nefarious]

http://www.hulkshare.com/ijy461h4qo00

Not much i have to say about this song, its been a while since i made a song with just myself.
Ive had them all waiting to get recorded, hope you enjoy reading the lyrics and listening.

(Verse1)
It started off with an awesome explosion.
A loss of emotion im crossing an ocean.
Saying what is not to be spoken.
It got me to go insane with the thoughts that i hold in.
Molding a picture to fit what ive chosen.
Frozen in ice so thick from the cold wind.
Blowing my direction, knowing i was desinted.
Showing you im going to where noone ever gets when.
Im lower than the rest and im fine with the fact.
That im known to be depressed everytime that i rap.
But i'll always be the best in my mind where im at.
Isnt ever gonna change cause i shine through the black.
And the darkness that pulls me behind to the back.
Have i cryed till my eyes are as blind as a bats.
Every line that i pass, to remind of the past.
And define that ive climbed to as high as the last.

(Chorus)
You'll remember forever.
I'll never surrender.
And every day i wake up i'll be better than ever.
Remember forever.
I'll never surrender.
And every day i wake up i'll be better than ever.

(Verse2)
Im in the middle of a journey, screaming.
Noone ever heard me, demons.
Telling me to conquer the world am im kneeling.
Hurt and revealing a purpose the earth isnt worth what im feeling.
A curtain concealing, the person ive been.
Its a curse that i dream of the worst ever seen.
So the quickest way to die is to look into my eyes.
You're life has now been taken when i took you by surprise.
And i wouldnt be ashamed of the wrong that ive done.
What i want to become is in the song that ive sung.
For aslong as ive lived there was only one.
Thing to wait for the day that ive known would come.
To bring peace to my soul when i reach for the goal.
Then increase till im full and unleash with a flow.
Can i speak what i know, to prove its all clear.
I could keep on a roll or lose and fall here.

(Verse3)
There's not a risk that i wont take, for what i love most.
If i wasnt the greatest than i guess that i come close.
And i could be better, at any second, infected.
And redirected, to hit you every method i've ever.
Thought of aggression is always another friend that i trust.
Im always stressed with depression but i will never give up.
Cuz im assembling everything into strength in a rush.
To go the length is enough, but i have yet to errupt.
I wanna get to regret a mistake for something ive done.
When i was young it was easier but ive slowly become.
Another side that ive been for a while, im silent.
Forgivefull and vile, im violent ive sinned but i'll.
Be arriving to give you a smile in time or id live in denile.
I find that im missin a peice of mind but im thinking of what.
To rhyme to be infinite you're assigned to an instrument.
Get in line to define what ive said is mine to different.
In this kind of an incident.

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[Eedee]

First of all, that beat was sick. Your lyrics are very well written, no complaints there. The multis were very nice on the ears to hear.

Now, here's for your critique... Your vocals seem very flat/dry/low... There's no depth or wetness to them. It didn't mesh with the beat well, it seemed to me. Add some layers, pan them, maybe some compression and EQ? They just felt too low volume and dry. These are the verse vocals, the chorus vocals were perfect, I loved those (the singing was great, actually. Good job!).

I enjoyed this, your flow and intonation is top-notch. You either have great breath control or your punch-in's are amazing.

Good shit, man.

[Coulter]

I've got this on replay bro
I loved your flow on this, you should really post more stuff on here.
The whole depression thing works as it can relate to a lot of people, it was really easy to get into the mood of listening to this track, you could have been pissed, depressed, lonely, or just want to get pumped up. It had that kind of 'I'm down, but I'll get myself back' sort of vibe. Loved all of it.

But like Eedee said man, I couldn't really hear you. I dunno, it seemed okay at first, then I really wanted the volume of your vocals to pick up. But if you fixed that.. shit, this track would have been damn-near perfect for your style.

[NoColor]

Dope flow and vibe. Reminded me of the Frozen track on that Lebron album.

Dat internal rhyme.

And I liked the mixing on the hook but the lyrics were a little corny.

Turn up your vocals bro. It'll be "better than ever".

Hit me back!

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[Tash8]

I believe you need to up the volume of the vocals, I can barely hear em.

"Im in the middle of a journey, screaming.
Noone ever heard me, demons.
Telling me to conquer the world am im kneeling.
Hurt and revealing a purpose the earth isnt worth what im feeling.
A curtain concealing, the person ive been.
Its a curse that i dream of the worst ever seen."

probably the dopest lines i've heard you spit, that's simply great right there; the rhymes, the flow, the delivery, just perfect work.

great song, id like to download it if you could up the vocals for me?

[Ticalrecords]

vocals are a lil low, like everyone else has said, that third verse flow was awesome it kept going and going and going AND GOING lol. good stuff bruh, your hooks never disappoint.

mind checking mine out?

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[Nefarious]

Thanks everyone i know its kinda low, but i never really ever go back and edit any songs i do, i just do them as fast as possible to save time for everyone else around me, sometimes it turns out perfect sometimes its not, but im still happy with what i got though, im buying completely new recording equipment and computer soon so i'll be dropping alot more eventually.